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Review of chapter "Part 1" from ReaperCB
Review:
In the words of Robin, "Holy Shitake Mushrooms Batman!"
You've captured Byakuya perfectly... and the only thing I'm wondering, aside from what all your other reviewers have already said, is when you're going to update?
Review By [ReaperCB] • Date [10 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from Rhodanthe
Review:
THAT ROCKED!!!! I can't wait for more!!!
Review By [Rhodanthe] • Date [4 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from YoruHana
Review:
*snickers* Only Xander could manage this. It's just the type of shit that happens to him on a daily bases.

Does the blades nature/feel an dual colors mean it's a twin zanpakuto like Kyouroku-taicho and Ukitake-taicho's swords?

No (normal) hollows + no soul chain + him (Kuchiki-taicho) not seeing demons normally means this is not his world? But if he (Xander) has a zanpakuto.... *frowns* Does that mean that they're not in the same dimension but still in the same universe or something? That somethings would carry over but not others? And if so, is the whole key mess going to mean that their worlds are going to eventually collide?

*shakes her head* Anyway, I like what you have an I'm looking forward to reading more of it when ever you get it out. *grin*
Comments from author:
>*snickers* Only Xander could manage this. It's just the type of shit that happens to him on a daily bases.
>
>Does the blades nature/feel an dual colors mean it's a twin zanpakuto like Kyouroku-taicho and Ukitake-taicho's swords?

Very, very sharp, but not quite like their blades.

> No (normal) hollows + no soul chain + him (Kuchiki-taicho) not seeing demons normally means this is not his world? But if he (Xander) has a
> zanpakuto.... *frowns* Does that mean that they're not in the same dimension but still in the same universe or something? That somethings
> would carry over but not others? And if so, is the whole key mess going to mean that their worlds are going to eventually collide?

Once again, very, very, sharp.

> *shakes her head* Anyway, I like what you have an I'm looking forward to reading more of it when ever you get it out. *grin*

We'll work on it.
Review By [YoruHana] • Date [3 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from JEHayes
Review:
That was pretty sweet. I have to say that I haven't seen many Bleach crossovers, and this one certainly seems to be the best. It definitely has the most potential. I can't wait to see Xander's zanpakuto. Happy writing.
Review By [JEHayes] • Date [16 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from Miststalker
Review:
I hope you continue this soon.
Review By [Miststalker] • Date [27 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Awesome story so far please update soon.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [13 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1" from Ben
Review:
I do not wish you to give any spoilers, but do you have a name lined up for Xander's Zanpakuto? Do you know what its Shikai and Bankai are like?

Might the Sunnydale crew learn of any group of Quincies in town? The Fang Gang? Are any of Wolfram and Hart's Clients or Partners residents of Hueco Mundo? What is Drusilla's reaction going to be? The Mayor's?
Comments from author:
> I do not wish you to give any spoilers, but do you have a name lined up for Xander's Zanpakuto? Do you know what its Shikai and Bankai are like?

Yes, yes, and yes.

> Might the Sunnydale crew learn of any group of Quincies in town? The Fang Gang? Are any of Wolfram and Hart's Clients or Partners residents of
> Hueco Mundo?

As the Buffy dimension is a different one from the Death God dimension; that would be no, no, and no.

> What is Drusilla's reaction going to be? The Mayor's?

You'll just have to wait and read.
Review By [Ben] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from CJNyfalt
Review:
Very interesting, I wonder if Xander also know how to use it. Is Buffy an immortal now?
Comments from author:
Xander'll learn, and no, Buffy's not an Immortal.
Review By [CJNyfalt] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1" from Zari
Review:
Very nicely done. Byakuya was mostly in character, and he is very difficult to portray. Also, I assume that he can speak English, or perhaps he could because Xander can.

I'm interested to see where this will go. Do they live in the same "world" as Ichigo or is it a similar one... i.e. a parallel universe of some sort? Do the Shinigami even exist there? Further, I wonder what shape Xander's zanpakutou will take.

Zari
Comments from author:
> Very nicely done. Byakuya was mostly in character, and he is very difficult to portray. Also, I assume that he can speak English, or perhaps he could
> because Xander can.

Byakuya actually explains that in the story; they are Death Gods that serve the entire world, so they have to function anywhere in the world, which means that they are taught multiple languages in the Death God acadamy.

> I'm interested to see where this will go. Do they live in the same "world" as Ichigo or is it a similar one... i.e. a parallel universe of some sort? Do the
> Shinigami even exist there? Further, I wonder what shape Xander's zanpakutou will take.

No, they are not in the same world. A rather big hint towards that was that Byakuya had never come across a demon, that they are few and far between, while here in the Buffy-verse they're about around every street corner.
Review By [Zari] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1" from azereath
Review:
great story so far, extremely well done in combining the two series and the characterization.
please continue and update soon
Review By [azereath] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1" from ROGMethos
Review:
Wow, thats all I can say. Bleach is one of my favorite anime's and Kuchiki Byakuya is one of my favorite Shinigami captain. Having Xander accidentally dress as him was very different. You had Kuchiki's personality pretty good. Can't wait to read more, will there be more Bleach characters showing and will Byakuya show up to Xander after this, he's now technically a Shinigami........
Comments from author:
Eventually, but at first it will be focused on Xander, Buffy's and Willow's exploits.
Review By [ROGMethos] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1" from thales
Review:
Very nice!

I have seen a few bleach!Xander fics, but this has the best start i have seen till now

give your best and make this fic one of the greatest on the board! The potential is there :)
Review By [thales] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Yay :)

You have very good descriptive skills. I like how you fleshed out Xander and Willow's house.

I really like how - except for possibly Spiderman and Godzilla - you had your version of Ethan keep with the show's policy of selling generic costumes that were expertly - and accidentally in Xander's case - remade into official characters :)

Nice touch with the ghost-phaser and Bun-Bun :D
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1" from OLazyOne
Review:
Excellent job.

Very well written and interesting.

I'm guessing that your going to use Willow to explain to Xander what a death-god is?
Review By [OLazyOne] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1" from Iriai
Review:
Wow, love it. It's off to a great start. It seems however, that Xander doesn't remember anything of being a dead god, so how's he gonna know about his zanpakutou and dead god training? Anyways, update soon!
Review By [Iriai] • Date [30 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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