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Review of chapter "Genius" from MistressRed
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I loved the story. Don is so very stubborn! Charlie was of course right. Great job!
Review By [MistressRed] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Genius" from spacey
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::jaw drops:: that's... intense
Review By [spacey] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Genius" from (Moderator)Teri
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Just sad. Good, very good, but sad. Poor Don.
Review By [(Moderator)Teri] • Date [26 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Genius" from (Recent Donor)kvk
Review:
Wow! Just right.
Review By [(Recent Donor)kvk] • Date [24 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Genius" from Elleria
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Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Genius" from feekh
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I did not see that end coming. I honestly thought that he had managed to learn faster, but Charlie is always right after all. So sad.
Review By [feekh] • Date [10 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Genius" from Bugeyedmonster
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And you do realize that now you've opened up yourself to us wanting to know about Don's first death. How did it happen? Was it during his fugitive recovery days? That might explain why his dad got worried as it's hinted in the show that Fugitive Recovery led to some dark days for Don. I can see how some PTS due to 'dying' would affect Don.

Anyway... more please?

(^_^)/
BEM
Comments from author:
Sorry, but I doubt it. For the moment, this universe is done. I have too many other unfinished works that I'd love to finish.
PaBurke
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [10 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Genius" from LMiC
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Ouch, that ending hurt. Well written and unexpected.
Review By [LMiC] • Date [7 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Genius" from Nyn
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That was a really touching ending. I didn't see it coming. Poor Don -- I cannot see him without his dad and brother around. Sad! But the image of stubborn Don determined to beat the timeline, and actually therefore fulfilling Charlie's estimates of his stubbornness and training ability, well, it makes me smile anyway.
Review By [Nyn] • Date [7 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Genius" from MinaLynn
Review:
My word, I shouldn't have read this at work. That last chapter had me in tears. This was wonderful - I love Numb3rs stories and this is the first Xover of this nature that I have read. Thank you for sharing it.
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [7 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Genius" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
Love the idea of Don simply shooting Immortals who don't wait for him to get the sword out of his trunk. LOL! And there are heavy caliber or large caliber bullets that are capable of taking off someone's head, like that .75 round Edgerton mentions. There is a 5.0 (sp?) round that is 'against' the Geneva con rules, you're only supposed to use it against stuff like tanks. I'm sure that could easily take apart a human head.

And you do realize that you could have Matthew show up, right? Once they both realize neither is a headhunter, I'm sure that as fellow FBI guys, they'll get along very well.

Oh, what would Don do if Corey showed up?

(^_^)/
BEM
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Genius" from GoldenRat
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Great fic, I love the character interaction.
Review By [GoldenRat] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Genius" from VillageOrchid
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This was a cool tag to the earlier bits.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Academic" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This is really interesting, but I hardly know the characters from Numbers -- needing more visual description or context. Who is Amita?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Genius" from (Past Donor)HiltonK
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Loved the little ficlet at the end - go Charlie! :0)
Review By [(Past Donor)HiltonK] • Date [6 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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