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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from war
Review:
and the scary thing is if Buffy does make it to the shuttle and escapes to Hades that place would be like a fun park for her the way she is now.hope Jamie and Buffy run into Ransom considering how evil she was her meeting her fate at Buffy's hands would be poetic justice for all the innocents she's harmed.

if they do make it planetside at least Honor,Nimitz and the Grayson's will have plenty of time to bring Buffy back to the forefront.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm not sure who Buffy will run into on the way back. They do have to fight their way back.

It's going to be fun planetside because they various Manticorans will be trying to figure out Buffy's abilities and who she is.

Will post again soonish. 8)
Review By [war] • Date [18 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from burmafrdnow
Review:
Pretty good. Only you have to be careful stretching out torture, etc. It VERY quickly deadens the audience.
Love Honor Harrington series. So little fanfiction, though. Gotta take it where I can find it.

Some people probably think what you are showing is an exageration. Very few want to examine the record of the Soviet Union and the KGB; and the other communists states and their secret police. romania's might have even been worse. Too many want to sweep it under the rug.
Makes me want to puke when people turn up their noses and call waterboarding torture; minor things like abu ghraib as some big deal. THEY KNOW NOTHING about what happened in places like South America and the communists states.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I know what you mean. That's it on the torture. Just had to set the scene as to why Buffy retreated within herself and the Slayer is out to play.

I agree with you. The things that people have done to each other vastly eclipses anything we can imagine. The horrors of the communist regimes where endless millions 'disappeared' were beyond comprehension. The same thing is still being practiced, albeit on a smaller scale in several places today, notable South America and Africa. From our comfortable seats in America, we sometimes forget how cheap the rest of the world views life and of the hardships the founding fathers went through to ensure you and I can drive down to our local MacDonald's and pick up a Big Mac.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Wow! Love your descriptive skills - really looking forward to what Slayer will do in the process of escaping :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Buffy will have help escaping, since Honor knows where she's at. But expect a body count when it happens.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MachiavelliJr
Review:
Let's see - Buffy going round the twist, Honor as close as she's ever gonna get, Cordelia's not dead yet (I always found myself wanting more of her) and the whole lot are quite literally going to Hell. That should be interesting - the actual EoH plot wouldn't be much changed by having a Slayer on board so I eagerly await something a LOT different. Considering that the ship they're on is PNS Vlad Tepes, I'm half expecting Dracula in black-and-red...
On the negative side, the infodump was a bit clumsy - I felt a lot of it could have waited - but that's a pretty small niggle considering a) how often Mr Weber does it and b) how good the rest is. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I didn't change things too drastically with my insertion of Buffy into the Honorverse. They still get marooned, etc.

I know I crammed a lot in a bit too fast. Unfortunately, I was trying to balance those who hadn't read the series with those who had. Tried to give those who hadn't enough background. I appreciate the feedback. 8)
Review By [MachiavelliJr] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Marcel
Review:
Woohoo! HH crossover... nice! And not a bad start at all.

Looking forward to what comes next.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Glad you're enjoying it. Look for more soonish. 8)
Review By [Marcel] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elric
Review:
HOLY CRAP!!!! Honor meet Buffy the rampaging slayer.
Comments from author:
Yep. Poor Buffy's retreated from reality to protect herself from the torture, leaving the Slayer behind. The Slayer doesn't have the same restraints or ethics that Buffy the person has. Who knows what mischief she might get into? 8)
Review By [Elric] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon
Review:
More please.Love it.
Comments from author:
More coming soon. I promise. 8)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Have to say that I thought that Chapter One was way better written than the prologue. Having said that it's nice to see someone doing a HH fic, I can only remember one other and that seems to be abandoned (last time I looked).

I've not read this book in the HH series so its all new to me, but you seem to have caught the character of the books very well.

Eagerly looking forward to more of this story, I'm putting a track on it so I don't miss anything.

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I appreciate the feedback. I always wanted to do this crossover. I really like the characters that David Weber created. I will do my best to stay true to them. 8)
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
Excellent job of capturing the spirit of the HH books, especially the switching POVs between several different characters, including the villains. Thanks for attempting this one. You've established a high level of quality already in the prologue and ch 1.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments. I will do my best to live up to what you've said. 8)
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from grd
Review:
Too bad it was not Ransom's arm that was ripped off by Buffy. I hope Honor can free her soon. Kudos for writing this too. I'm always eager to read a crossover with Honorverse. Please continue and more State Sec goons ripped to pieces please.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Expect to see a lot of State Sec goons ripped up. I like bloody escapes, don't you? 8)
Review By [grd] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Iceflame
Review:
I'm going to be watching for updates on this one like Buffy' looking for a way out right now. With the same consequences if updates are not forthcoming as it would be if Buffster gets out!!!! I LOVE THIS CROSSOVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


MORE!! MORE!!!! MOORRREEEE!!!!!
Comments from author:
ROFLMAO! Thanks! I really glad you like it. Hopefully, I will have another chapter posted in a day or so. 8)
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent work! I love the stories set in the Honorverse and I am impressed with how you have captured the spirit of the series. I have no idea of where your story is going, but I am sure the Slayer will be very helpful on the prison planet when Honor and her people escape and end up kicking some Peep StateSec butts. Please continue this interesting cross.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Honor Harrington is probably my favorite fictional protagonist. It was just a matter of time until I tried to cross Buffy, my other favorite fictional protagonist, over with Honor. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I hope to post another chapter soonish. 8)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PATM
Review:
The disclaimer is f-ing important, don't blow this! Otherwise keep going.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I put one in. Don't hate me cause I'm lazy. 8)
Review By [PATM] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Past Donor)Ponder
Review:
You're missing the disclaimer on this one too.

*** Ponder
Comments from author:
Thanks. I fixed it. I don't know what I was thinking. Probably in too big a hurry. Had to post before my laptop went dead at the wifi spot, lol. 8)
Review By [(Past Donor)Ponder] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from satsuma
Review:
This has GREAT potential!!!! The relationship between the Salamander and the Slayer will become a thing of legend. More please.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. A thing of legend, huh? I hope so. 8)
Review By [satsuma] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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