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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MachiavelliJr
Review:
Let's see - Buffy going round the twist, Honor as close as she's ever gonna get, Cordelia's not dead yet (I always found myself wanting more of her) and the whole lot are quite literally going to Hell. That should be interesting - the actual EoH plot wouldn't be much changed by having a Slayer on board so I eagerly await something a LOT different. Considering that the ship they're on is PNS Vlad Tepes, I'm half expecting Dracula in black-and-red...
On the negative side, the infodump was a bit clumsy - I felt a lot of it could have waited - but that's a pretty small niggle considering a) how often Mr Weber does it and b) how good the rest is. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I didn't change things too drastically with my insertion of Buffy into the Honorverse. They still get marooned, etc.

I know I crammed a lot in a bit too fast. Unfortunately, I was trying to balance those who hadn't read the series with those who had. Tried to give those who hadn't enough background. I appreciate the feedback. 8)
Review By [MachiavelliJr] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Marcel
Review:
Woohoo! HH crossover... nice! And not a bad start at all.

Looking forward to what comes next.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Glad you're enjoying it. Look for more soonish. 8)
Review By [Marcel] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elric
Review:
HOLY CRAP!!!! Honor meet Buffy the rampaging slayer.
Comments from author:
Yep. Poor Buffy's retreated from reality to protect herself from the torture, leaving the Slayer behind. The Slayer doesn't have the same restraints or ethics that Buffy the person has. Who knows what mischief she might get into? 8)
Review By [Elric] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon
Review:
More please.Love it.
Comments from author:
More coming soon. I promise. 8)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Have to say that I thought that Chapter One was way better written than the prologue. Having said that it's nice to see someone doing a HH fic, I can only remember one other and that seems to be abandoned (last time I looked).

I've not read this book in the HH series so its all new to me, but you seem to have caught the character of the books very well.

Eagerly looking forward to more of this story, I'm putting a track on it so I don't miss anything.

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I appreciate the feedback. I always wanted to do this crossover. I really like the characters that David Weber created. I will do my best to stay true to them. 8)
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
Excellent job of capturing the spirit of the HH books, especially the switching POVs between several different characters, including the villains. Thanks for attempting this one. You've established a high level of quality already in the prologue and ch 1.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments. I will do my best to live up to what you've said. 8)
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from grd
Review:
Too bad it was not Ransom's arm that was ripped off by Buffy. I hope Honor can free her soon. Kudos for writing this too. I'm always eager to read a crossover with Honorverse. Please continue and more State Sec goons ripped to pieces please.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Expect to see a lot of State Sec goons ripped up. I like bloody escapes, don't you? 8)
Review By [grd] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Iceflame
Review:
I'm going to be watching for updates on this one like Buffy' looking for a way out right now. With the same consequences if updates are not forthcoming as it would be if Buffster gets out!!!! I LOVE THIS CROSSOVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


MORE!! MORE!!!! MOORRREEEE!!!!!
Comments from author:
ROFLMAO! Thanks! I really glad you like it. Hopefully, I will have another chapter posted in a day or so. 8)
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent work! I love the stories set in the Honorverse and I am impressed with how you have captured the spirit of the series. I have no idea of where your story is going, but I am sure the Slayer will be very helpful on the prison planet when Honor and her people escape and end up kicking some Peep StateSec butts. Please continue this interesting cross.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Honor Harrington is probably my favorite fictional protagonist. It was just a matter of time until I tried to cross Buffy, my other favorite fictional protagonist, over with Honor. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I hope to post another chapter soonish. 8)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PATM
Review:
The disclaimer is f-ing important, don't blow this! Otherwise keep going.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I put one in. Don't hate me cause I'm lazy. 8)
Review By [PATM] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Past Donor)Ponder
Review:
You're missing the disclaimer on this one too.

*** Ponder
Comments from author:
Thanks. I fixed it. I don't know what I was thinking. Probably in too big a hurry. Had to post before my laptop went dead at the wifi spot, lol. 8)
Review By [(Past Donor)Ponder] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from satsuma
Review:
This has GREAT potential!!!! The relationship between the Salamander and the Slayer will become a thing of legend. More please.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. A thing of legend, huh? I hope so. 8)
Review By [satsuma] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Not an easy crossover, but one with a great deal of potential.

Due to the information intense nature of the narrative, and the lack of dialog, the paragraphs are fairly long. The pace and flow would work a little better if the paragraphs were split. While the general rule maybe 4 to 6 sentences long that is usually when the sentences are 10 to 15 words in length.

Dropping Buffy in enemy hands, and then sending her feral. Intriguing choices - can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I appreciate the feedback. Paragraph length has always been one of my downfalls. I make them a little long. Any advice is always appreciated. 8)

Glad you like the premise. More coming soon.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
very interesting start.yeah the SS were some brutal bastards.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I hope to post another chapter soonish. 8)
Review By [war] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
Review:
wow, I've never seen a Buffy/Honor crossover before. Congrats! And one of the few points in Honor's career where it'd be most useful (ie mostly she'd be on ship fighting other ships, not much room for a slayer in that)---
Later on (if they escape & get to Manticore) the genetic super soldier types who are the main villains later on will be real interested in Buffy----
One wonders if this is the same universe as her own? Still slayers on old earth? Malaka Fray maybe? (though that's likely not far enough in the future)---
Hopefully Buffy will recover & retain her memories...
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I wanted to put Buffy somewhere that she would be appreciated. It's not the same one as Fray. I deliberately threw her into another universe, although if she ever hits earth, she can read about this universe's Buffy Summers.

Don't worry about her memories. Sometime when she feels safe, our Buffy will come back out. I hope. 8)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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