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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Ltlconf
Review:
Howdy!

Yet another damned good SG1/BtVS crossover. Several good ones out there but all seem to come in spurts (hint, hint!).

Like how you're havin' the SG1 crew dealin' with Dawn, a very plausible mix of concern and caution. Once the scars are well known you know Jack's paternal instincts will kick in somthin' fierce.

Love Faith goin' in a mad paternal mode of her own. Faith ain't one ta feel anythin' half way and you know she'll do ANYTHIN' ta get ta Dawn. It does seem she's gettin' the safe route ta Earth so she don't get captured or splatted on some Gate protection.

Ya just know the reunion is going ta be a strange mix of tension and relief. I always imagined that Faith and Dawn got on like a house on fire (both know what its like ta be outside lookin' in) but Dawn is a Summers, and that means a talent for grudges! Once over though...well, Dawn was ready ta charge a shotgun-wieldin' cop ta help Faith, armed with nothing but good looks, an attitude, and a half-dozen scared teens!

Shows Dawn likely remembered good times with Faith, and wanted them back.

I like this, got me caught, so git writin!LOL
Review By [Ltlconf] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from BrownFinderth
Review:
I would greatly appreciate it very much if Shezzi were able to come back to this fascinating story and continue updating it!!! The last update was just less than a year ago!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from ClumsyElf
Review:
Great story!! Hope to see more soon!!

SARAH
Review By [ClumsyElf] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from PATM
Review:
The challenge looks to have given life, I hope it continues to thrive and bear fruit.
Review By [PATM] • Date [5 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from bookalicious
Review:
I just found this today. This is a great story. It's interesting and more than a little suspenseful. I hope you decide to finish this. Thanks.
Review By [bookalicious] • Date [7 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from deathgeonous
Review:
Hmm, nice fic. I do hope to see more on it sometime. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Since Faith was drawn to a world with a vanishing Stargate, I'm guessing the Nox world and that Faith's link to Dawn is leading her to a safe route instead of letting her pancake on the iris?
Comments from author:
Ahhhh, you got it :)
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [23 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from LeaFairy
Review:
It's great to see an update on this! It's been so long, I had to re-read all over again. Anyhoo, this was a fantastic chapter! I loved the bit with Faith and hope she reaches Dawn soon... at least soonish. LoL.

I also loved the part with Dawn meditating and the 'vision' she had of her past self and older self, and whoever the other lady was. Very intriguing.

Anyways, I can't wait to read more! Thanks for updating!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [11 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from winnie
Review:
although I do not remember reading this story or setting up tracking, I went back to the start and re-read/read the story. Have enjoyed it and look forward to the rest to come. Poor Faith, she is not getting there easily.
Review By [winnie] • Date [11 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from spk
Review:
Happy to see this story continued. Can't wait to see everyone's reaction to Faith's arrival. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from LeaFairy
Review:
Pretty interesting story so far!

I really like the plot of Dawn (the key) really being from the Stargate universe originally and having to go back there because she couldn't physically stay in the Sunnydale universe anymore... It's a very different and awesome idea. I also love Faith finding a way to follow her too and I can't wait for them to meet up again...

Anyhoo, this has been a great read so far and really I look forward to reading more! Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [18 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Gideon
Review:
Adding in Faith should start to make things *interesting* :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from apollo
Review:
This is a good story. When are you planning on posting the next Chapter?

Also, could you clarify changes or setting for SG1? Daniel knowing about the Wraith indicates that it happened after "Letters from Pegasus" in Atlantis, which occurred around the time Jacob died and well after Janet died, and Jack was promoted. So I'm a little confused, setting-wise. Other than that, it is good.

Also, just to make sure I understand correctly, the only change to Buffyverse is that Buffy and Xander died during/as a result of "Chosen"?
Comments from author:
Soon, I hope. As you read some of my more current stuff, you'll start finding the reasons for my slow down: uni, work and a dying baby brother. None of my work has been abandoned unless it is clearly labeled as such (only one of my stories, therefore).

Ok...changes...so I kind of wasn't paying attention. In my own head, Janet should never have died, so that just kind of bled through, as did the Jacob thing...and Jack clearly hasn't been promoted. SO probably the easiest way around this is to say that they found Atlantis earlier than they did. I dunno, now i'm gonna have to figure it out (pouts)

You are quite correct in that. Everything else happens exactly the same.

Thanks for reviewing! Glad you liked! love xx Shezzi
Review By [apollo] • Date [5 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from rhiowen
Review:
I just found this story again so i though what the hey re read it :) and since i did that i may as well re review it too. My fingers are still crossed that you update and its getting very annoying so please do so soon :D
Review By [rhiowen] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
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