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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Chikageko
Review:
Nothing against your work, i love it, but you're repeating two lines of heavy ass bullshit in this chapter. The secret identities thing. Only thing it really helps is keeping your out of trouble with the cops and in trouble with your friends and family. All of the villains that you cant steamroll within moments of meeting find out who you are within a few confrontations anyways, especially the dangerous ones. The reasons to try and maintain them are limited to anyone who has an ounce of logic.
Then there's the superheros don't kill thing. Honestly that's just plain stupid. I can get the power corrupts logic, i can get the avoiding being judge jury and executioner in the eyes of the public, but holding them NEVER works and they kill people by the truckload on a daily basis. Even the ones who are just thieves vandals or terrorists tend to knock down buildings because it makes the scene look more impressive and the death toll that racks up... well. Na. Wolverine has the right of it. If you get the chance, put em down quiet and out of the public eye. If you want to go the high and mighty route, haul their beaten ass into court present evidence of their crimes and have the trial swiftly with the standard consequences of if they were a normal human who accomplished that level of carnage.

From Reeds comments i take it that M-day hasn't happened yet? If that's the case I'd offer either getting Emma frost to take over from Xavier on the case of one Wanda Maximov if she's currently in her psychotic state or kill her outright. Reality bending is one of those powers that humans really shouldn't be allowed. Shit, how far are you right now anyways? If Genosha hasn't been massacred yet then hunt down and Kill Xaviers sister, there's a demon if there ever was one. And Trask... Definitely kill all versions of trask and striker, the facility people and their parent organization the weapons division. There was never a weapons x that wolverine and the xmen keep talking about, the X part was because wolverine was Canada's weapon number ten.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [12 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from RogueAngel
Review:
I really love this story. Tho truth is I'm a fan of a few of your stories, its just Buffy in Hero's worlds are a favourite of mine. So her costume kinda looks like Silmeria's from Valkyrie Profile only Silver not blue/purple. If you don't know that character then cool lol, just the picture matches up really close. Anyway I wish you continue this story. I really really would love to see what happens next.
Review By [RogueAngel] • Date [13 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from DieselDriver
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Ah this is a very fun story. Can't hardly wait to read how bad Juggernaut is going to get his ass kicked. On the other hand Buffy might just be in for more fight than she thinks.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [21 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Warrior Girl in Mirror" from DieselDriver
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Cool picture but just one thing bothered me. Aren't her boobs a bit on the low side? All the descriptions I've read and Michelle Geller sure didn't have them sit that low. Other than that? Wow! I love the expression on her face in the mirror. Very introspective.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [21 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from grd
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Please continue this excellent tale
Review By [grd] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Kaelas
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This is a very cruel place to stop! Liking how this is going so far, though I miss the rest of the Buffy cast. My votes is on Steve- Johny's not a bad guy or anything, but Buffy needs someone a bit more serious in my opinion.
Review By [Kaelas] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
First off, you should know that I rarely read Purely Buffy stories as she really grates on my last nerve. That being said, frickin' WOW!!! I loved this fic! It's got humor, adventure, combat, megaviolence, and did I mention humor? Now I really, really need to see more! Please sir, can I have some more?!?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Kaleidofox
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Why is there not a next chapter to this?!?

And I am sooo waiting to see Loki's reaction to his new "brother"! Because we all know Loki never really goes away. He is always around to cause the Avengers trouble.
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from deathgeonous
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I'm STILL missing this. Please, please update. Well, thanks for writing what you did of it, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from chrysanthemum
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So very, very awesome.
Review By [chrysanthemum] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from brokenmimir
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I recently reread this the other day, and I definitely still like it. The writing isn't as good as some of your more recent pieces, but I liked the concepts, and thought this had some real potential. I hope you do something with this again someday.
Review By [brokenmimir] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Dragonelf
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I have just finished rereading this story again and I hope you will get inspired to add more chapters to the story.

::Gives the plot bunny a Chocolate Pie::

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"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from KDZB
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I seriously adore this story, Life's Ending, Life's Beginning, and Things To Do In Colorado Springs When You're Bored. This is the first story that intrigued me as a crossover with Marvel characters, particularly the Avengers. I look forward to you posting future chapters, especially since you left the story on a cliff hanger!
Review By [KDZB] • Date [12 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from grd
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This is in response to the "One More Day" story that I just heard about and despise. Hope this helps to inspire the author to write more. It seems fanfic is our only hope now a days.

Buffy, Slayer and Champion of Asgard, slowly spun down her enchanted hammer, Myrkr Banamaor. Dimensional travel sure saves on air fares as she appears in a hospital janitor's closet. Thank you, Myrkr she says to her weapon. A mental image of a Giles-like frown has Buffy smiling at her weapon companion.

She had grown quite close to Peter and Mary Jane during her time in this dimension. Only Janet Van Dyne and Mary Jane Parker truly understood the need for therapeutic shopping. Mary Jane has become a great friend. When she needed someone to talk to Mary Jane was there. When she needed a laugh, Peter was the one to go to. She was determined to be there for them now. She heard rumors of Peter begging the superhero community for help and hoped that Big Brain Reed, Playboy Stark, or Mystic Supreme Strange was able to help him. Buffy would be there if they couldn't. Buffy's Asgardian and Slayer senses flare suddenly, "There's a demon in the area!"

Joe Quesada, hospital janitor was happy to finally end his shift. A long day of cleaning up messes and bodily fluids was coming to an end. Unfortunately, as he reaches for the door to the janitor's closet, it slams open into him. Knocking him and his mop bucket over, drenching him and the floor with dark and nasty smelling fluids. "What the hell!" He exclaims.
A tall blonde armored figure dashes out and marches past him. I hope it's not another Der Kindestod demon feeding off sick kids, Buffy thinks.
Patients, nurses, and doctor's stare wide eye at the figure they have come to know as Slayer as she marches past them, intent on her mission.

In Aunt May's room...

Mephisto in his red demonic form stands firm and asks, "Your time is almost up, Parker, have you decided to accept my proposal? Your Marriage for the life of your dear Aunt May. Are we agreed?"
"How do we know you even have the power to do what you promise? Can you really do it?" Peter asks.
"I want to add that you also take everyone's memory of Peter as Spiderman too." Mary Jane interjects.
"Why of course I can, my dear. Now do we have a bargain?" Mephisto asks eagerly.

Suddenly, a thrown hammer strikes Mephisto, stunning the demon and driving him back.

"What is going on here!? Are you too mental? Are you making deals with Demons now?!"
Peter retorts, "I had too, he's the only one that can save Aunt May!"
"Peter, no bargain with his kind can ever be good! Remember the wish demon's I told you about. They never end well, no matter what you wish for! " Buffy yells back.
"Buffy, if it was your Mom you could save, wouldn't you want do it?" Mary Jane asks.
Buffy hammers at the rising Mephisto again, knocking him down. "My mother would not want to live knowing I made such a deal. Do you think for a moment Aunt May would want you to do this? Think guys!"

"ENOUGH! Slayer this is not for you to interfere, you have no say here!" Mephisto rises and gestures toward Buffy. Dark tentacles reach out and engulf the Slayer. "This is a mortal matter that you have no part in."

"Don't trust anything he says! It's a lie and he will twist it to his own ends!" Buffy exclaims.

"Silence Slayer!" dark tentacles cover Buffy's mouth as she struggles to move.

"Time is running out, it is almost midnight! Do we have a bargain?" Mephisto asks again.


The universe seems to stand still awaiting a reply....


"No." Mary Jane whispers. Peter is stricken as he stares at her reply.

Mephisto morphs into Aunt May, "Peter dear, please help me." Her hands reaching toward him.

Peter looks on, hands rising forward in reply. Memories replay in his mind. Memories of his Aunt May and Uncle Ben raising him. Comforting him when he was scared. Teaching him. He recalls Uncle Ben's numerous lectures about "with great power, comes great responsibility."

Tears run down his face. His reaching hands turn to throw webbing that strike Mephisto in the face. "Never!"

"WHAT!" Mephisto exclaims as he morphs back into his red demonic form.

"I SAID NO!" Peter's fist slams into Mephisto. In the distance, a clock chime tolls down to midnight, each strike against the demon coincides with the chimes.

"Foolish Parker, her death is your fault then. You are responsible for her death!" Mephisto taunts as he summons flames to burn off the webbing.

As the twelfth toll chimes for the midnight hour, Peter falls to his knees sobbing.

"It is all your....!" A blinding white light from Buffy's hammer causes the demon to screech in shock as Buffy aims her hammer at Mephisto. "Shut up and leave them alone!" Buffy shouts.

"Meddling child! Your interference has ruined plans within plans! You will pay dearly for this!" He covers himself in darkness and fades away.

The stillness is broken by a steady whine as Aunt May's heart monitor flat lines. Doctor's and nurses rush in.
Buffy in her mortal form stands back as Peter and Mary Jane sadly embrace. The hospital staff slowly nod to each other and back away. A nurse shuts down the monitor's alarm.

Buffy recalls memories of her mother's death as she tearfully whispers, "take care of her Mom."

Peter and Mary Jane nod to Buffy and include her in a three-way hug as tears fall for a woman who was like a mother to all of them.


Elsewhere....


A man waits by a bridge as a young woman approaches.
"I've been waiting forever for you dear. What took you so long?" Ben asks.

"Benjamin Parker, you know the children still needed me. You know full well that I couldn't leave until then." a youthful May Reilly Parker retorts.

"I was worried there for a moment." Ben replies. Ben rushes toward May and embraces her. Spinning her around as he hugs her.

"Oh! Put me down you old coot. You'll ruin my dress." May scolds as she smiles radiantly. "You just have to have faith in them,
dear. They've finally grown up now and learned all we could teach."

Ben's smile matches her own, "I've missed you so much! I can't wait to introduce you to many of my friends especially one Joyce Summers, a remarkable woman. She reminded me of you."

Arm and arm the two walk slowly across the bridge and into the light.
Review By [grd] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from deathgeonous
Review:
This is such a great fic. And yet again, you missed a prime time to update it with the release of the Avengers Movie. Ah well. I know I have no place to complain, and I know that real life can just be the bitch that makes you hers, but... after a bit over two years with a very anticipating cliffy, I WANT MORE. Ah well, for now, I'll just put this on my recs list. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [30 May 12] • Not Rated
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