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Fragile Balance Concluded

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Cool!

But I think you need to work on your spelling or was "Fagile Balance" deliberate?
Comments from author:
No I am very bad at spelling which is why I always use a spell check, however with the title I just typed it in wrong. I think that it's been put in quarantine now. Gosh this site is tough. But it'll make me a better person.

Thank you for your review keep the comments coming.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from feekh
Review:
That was your first effort? Wow.
Good stuff. You nailed Jack quite well and showed the differences between him and John, all the while keeping them similar.
Seeing as John hasn't told Jack that he is going to England, I smell a sequel. Don't make my nose a liar. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for your review.
Review By [feekh] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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