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Review of chapter "The Gauntlet" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well, some interesting ideas. I'm pretty sure you mean a Duel rather than dual (two/two faced). I'm not sure if you mean to have Willow connected to Severus or to Lilly biologically... and the crone earlier in the story seemed to indicate that if Willow deviated she'd kill Giles... so maybe an overhaul all together. It also was implied that Giles had to have sex with her (the Crone).

Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
thanks of course duel!!!

and will be a few twists and turns in this story
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Play with me" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Still trying to figure out what is going on, but enjoying the glimpses.
Comments from author:
hee hee
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Gauntlet" from Ramenth
Review:
An interesting story, though I'm having some trouble following the details, especially towards the ages. In the fifth year of Hogwarts students are supposed to be something like 15, right? But willow is 20-22 by the end of the 6th season of Buffy, which is well post graduation for the Rowlingverse.


Also, in Chapter 3 you say she's taking a class on Divinity? I wasn't aware that Wizards had a religion. Or that Willow would enroll, given that she's Wiccan at this point, and that neopagan faiths have a rather different view of the divine than traditionalist faiths that the term divinity conjures.
Comments from author:
ahhh I think perhaps you are looking a tad too deeply

re age - if you re read the chapter where Severus meets her for the first time. Dumbledore mentions that though she is really a seventh year student (her fake papers) - however due to her so called eccentric home schooling will take remedial classes So thats why she is all mixed classes some 1st, some 5th etc...

as a seventh year that would be 18 and I reckon she could carry that off, her worldliness might be attributed to being american ;-)

re class on divinity at this stage Willow couldnt care less what classes she takes, looking at tea leaves is as good a way as any.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Gauntlet" from ecbookworm
Review:
A duel is probably a bad idea. She's already struggling to keep herself under control. I'm pretty sure it's more about not killing Draco than not losing.
Review By [ecbookworm] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Gauntlet" from Bunney
Review:
Hmm well you are wondering off on the hole willow centered thing, but so far it seems interesting.

Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Gauntlet" from LordCorwin
Review:
the chapter was a little short ... I was expecting the duel ....
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Gauntlet" from Nyaneave
Review:
I love your story. It reminds me a bit about another story i read, by echo.
I liked that you pulled Lily into it. Especially that you didn' t just have him run to Petunia's
house, but explained his showed of thought.

I also thought I should remark that the Professor in Divination is called Trelawny.
Review By [Nyaneave] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Play with me" from Evie
Review:
gimme gimme gimme more! *greedy* :D I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Comments from author:
thank you thank you thank you thank you... love getting reviews
Review By [Evie] • Date [15 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Play with me" from kalibex
Review:
ARRGHHH, Merciless Cliffhanger -- Next Chapter, Puhleeeeeze!
Comments from author:
hope it satisfies
Review By [kalibex] • Date [7 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Play with me" from Keshkreature
Review:
Wow, this is awesome! I have no idea what the origins of Willow seem to have become, but I really like the coven at Hogwarts. And was Draco having some not-mean thoughts about Hermione?
Comments from author:
ahhh wait and see

as to Willows origins ... its going to be mind blowing but hopefully believable and will fit with storyline
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 5 storm rising" from fanofkali
Review:
Excellent chapter.

Willow = reincarnated Lilly?

Especially like the way Snape is in this story.
Comments from author:
Nope... but keep guessing

thanks for review ... happy Xmas
Review By [fanofkali] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch 5 storm rising" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot stew::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 5 storm rising" from kaithryne
Review:
like it
Review By [kaithryne] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 5 storm rising" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm concerned that the set-up you had earlier is that if Willow reveals herself Giles will be killed by the crone or die by magic? I do think that Willow should come into her own... but....?
Comments from author:
wait and see ... wait and see
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch 5 storm rising" from mithrilandtj
Review:
If Umbridge isn't careful, she's gonna end up like Warren.

Not that I care. She is a old bat in a pink toad suit.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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