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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
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I love to help out. I stink as a beta but I be happy to tell you what I think. If that helps any. I generally just run my works through spell and grammar check a few times. I still have a lot to learn myself.

If you are interested on seeing if I even write well enough to give you any help. I listed under this pen name on fanfiction.net

Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
If it is any comfort I have a few going back that far too. Sometimes life gets in the way no matter our best intentions. I just did not want you to think noone appereciated the fine story you have written. It been great to read.

Lisa
Comments from author:
Thank you Lisa. It's so nice to have someone in your corner. I still get reviews and some are negative, after I got over the hurt... it took several days. I just thank them for the review. They are honest in their critique and I must honor them... We would not be writers if we cannot handle one or two... or three (LOL) negative review.

Nordia.
Do you have an interest in being my beta?
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
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I hope you feel better and are writing again soon. I have enjoyed this work a lot.

Lisa
Comments from author:
I am working on this even as i wrote this brief note. I need to finish. I have been working on it since 2004. LOL
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [25 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from Lili
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My first time reading a crossover story of Buffy with Julian Luna. It is so refreshing to see Buffy with other characters than the usual ones. I love the relationship with Julian. So believable. Very good writing. Hope you give us an update soon. Just love that story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to review my work. I also love Buffy with Julian.and Jack of Stargate. Buffy is my favorite character to write. Yes I am still writing. But I been getting sick for the last month and a half. So I cannot concentrate of my stories. PS.I know I should finish Warriors of Light and Three Warriors but I end up writing a brand new fanfic starring my favorite people--Jack O'Neill and Buffy Summers.
Review By [Lili] • Date [2 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from BrownFinderth
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Good story line so far (thru chapter 22). In this dimension, as Buffy has no doppelganger, any possibility of her finding her friends in this dimension and befriending them?
And I'm looking forward to further updates!
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time out to review. At this time the Scooby will not be showing up in this story, because the plot of the story is set. This is a brand new world for Buffy and she is alone except for her husband (Julian Luna)from the Kindred universe. I am still working on some key plot lines before I sent anything to my beta, after which I will post. Thank you once again for the review. `Lotusja.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from FireWolfe
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Glad to hear you are working on this. It is a very interesting xover. I love that there are more types of vamps in play. Though I admit feeling bad for the origional Buffy. She should gain a break too. Maybe give her an other Julian?

Lisa
Comments from author:
Thank you FireWolfe(Lisa.) In my mind the other Buffy Lived the Cannon life. In my series New Beginning, Buffy from (Whedon Verse) went through a portal where she switch places with another Buffy from (Kindred Verse). The Whedon verse Buffy went to fall for Julian Luna of Kindred, then after a full life, she and Julian rested then given a reward of Anita Blake universe. In the meanwhile, Buffy from (Kindred Verse) went to take place of the Buffy(Whedon verse), where she had affair with both Spike and Riley. At least that was my thought. I hope you like this explanation.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [1 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from Dragonelf
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Yay, new chapters.

::Gives the plot bunny some chocolate apple pie::

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There cannot be a crisis next week.
My schedule is already full.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [21 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from immortalsilence
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oooohhhhh more chapters pretty pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Comments from author:
I am working on it.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [9 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from SassyFrass
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Interesting update. The fact that it's a vampire they are suspecting now, just adds to the mix.
One note. It's athame, not anthame.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Between me and my beta, we could quite spell the word. Even looking in a dictionary was no help, because it describe these words as correct. Anthame, Anathame, athame
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
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Love it and more would be great. I would love to see Edward get a staring role in this. I liek the hitman. He is a little dark but he is one of the most honest characters in the Anita verse. Other then his Ted persona which in its own way is honest as serial killer types go. I mean he has to have a secret identity and all that. His reasons have always been valid if a little darker and he does not pretend to be sunshine with those he hunts. I respect that. I really want to see Buffy's family and I would love for them to help out. Anyway more soon please.

Lisa
Comments from author:
Honestly I don't know how to write Edward. While reading the books, I never get a sense of him. With Anita and Buffy I knows what drives them, but Edward is an enigma to me. So I am not sure where he fits in all this.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [3 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from immortalsilence
Review:
ooohhhh its getting good more chapters pretty please
Comments from author:
Working on it!. Thanks for the review..
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [2 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from Aeryn
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Have to say I need more to quench the thirst you have given me with this story.
Comments from author:
I trying to write as fast as i can...See me spinning my wheels.
Review By [Aeryn] • Date [2 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from punzl
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Gee, i missed this series. If Buffy is supposedly, according to legend, the founder of the vampires, does that mean she is the Mother of all Darkness? Makes sense that Bella Morte wants her, and Julian, dead. Little far fetched, i suppose. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Comments from author:
Is Buffy the Mother of Darkness? Some believe so. I am not sure where I am going with this story as yet. We all have to wait and see.
Review By [punzl] • Date [16 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from FireWolfe
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I really am enjoying this series. Please do not leave it hanging. This is a very interesting triple xover and I look forward to seeing where you take it. More soon please. I would love to see more about Buffy and her family. It will be interesting to see how JC reacts when he learns about Cash.

Lisa
Comments from author:
Wow! you really love this story. i am stunned by your many review. Thank You!
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [15 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from FireWolfe
Review:
I really am enjoying this series. Please do not leave it hanging. This is a very interesting triple xover and I look forward to seeing where you take it. More soon please. I would love to see more about Buffy and her family. It will be interesting to see how JC reacts when he learns about Cash.

Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [15 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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