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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Review:
I'm confused.

If "Kindred Laws" is 500 years in the future, how can this be a sequal?

Explain please.
Comments from author:
In New Beginnings, the start of the series, Buffy entered the Kindred dimension and by Kindred Laws –five hundred years passed. at the end of Kindred Laws, Buffy demanded a rest, putting her to sleep for a thousand years. Because of the changes in Julian's dimension, The PTB put Buffy and Julian in a different dimension. . "Anita Blake's"

i hope this is not confusing anymore.

Give and take Buffy is almost two thousand years old. I think? 
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [21 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from LordCorwin
Review:
that's it .... what are you doing to us ....
Comments from author:
More is definitely on it's way.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [21 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from anouk
Review:
*cringes* Oh the French, the French! What I mean is: your French is, um how to say it nicely, not very good. Some phrases are correct but most is really quite confusing. Mostly, you simply try to translate words and keep the same structure, which doesn't always work, plus some sentences that have meaning in English are meaningless in French (I'm not quite sure if there is "second guessing" in French - while the concept is surely known to French, it is, as far as I can tell, not conveyed by that particular phrase. What I'd suggest is writing everything in English and just noting "said Jean-Claud in French" or something. Because otherwise it is really jarring. I kept starring at the phrases puzzling over the meaning of what was written. For a second there I thought I have completely forgotten my French ;) (the horror, 5 years of 18+ hours a week wasted! ;) ), but then I've noticed the translation. Ok, now that I have this off my chest:
If you insist on using some French like Ma Petite and Mon Amour remember to use the right gender - it's a bit confusing but even for females it's Mon Amour not Ma Amour.

Great concept for the story. I'm really liking it so far (apart from the French) and can't wait for the big meeting :)
Comments from author:
The French!. I use a translator. I do apologize.
Review By [anouk] • Date [21 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Feeds the plot bunny::

I am already looking forward to read any coming chapters you might get inspired to write.
Comments from author:
(\ /)
(='.'=) here is my bunny. More is on 'its way.
(")_(")
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [21 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from gigi
Review:
This was a great chapter. I can't wait to see the next. Please update soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [gigi] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
I thought you did a good job tying up the facts of their history and their new life. I'm looking forward to seeing how their presence in St Louis is dealt with.
Comments from author:
Couple more chapters and you have your answer.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from LordCorwin
Review:
Nice update ... only one nit - Formatting ... too much space between the lines
Comments from author:
okay. i will try to fix on next chapter if i can.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Dragonelf
Review:
I am already looking forward to read any new chapters you might get inspired to write.

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Comments from author:
More is on it's way.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SassyFrass
Review:
Yay! More of the story. Question though: is the randomly bolded text on purpose or an error in uploading? 'Cause it's rather annoying.
Please update again soon!
Comments from author:
Error al the way!. i try to fix several times, but no luck.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [7 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SIDURA
Review:
Yeah you reposted!
Review By [SIDURA] • Date [6 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from gigi
Review:
Good chapter. Please update soon.
Review By [gigi] • Date [6 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
Oh my goodness..this is interesting. Not only is Buffy the sire of the 4 bodyguards but she and Julian can sense every sentient thing in the world. This is what Whistler meant about their new power and changes.. What they have become...? Love it!
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [6 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LordCorwin
Review:
well hmmm ... I remember reading the previous incarnation of this story, before it was pulled .. I'm liking the way this one is going.
Comments from author:
Thank you taking the time to review. I glad you like this story. This is one of my favorite. I am having fun writing this.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [6 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [2 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from immortalsilence
Review:
oooohhhh i love it more chapters pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [1 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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