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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from JaCee
Review:
Excellent story so far. I'd love to read more of it sometime Kinda would like to see a fic like this where they manage to drag X back and Cheery, Carrot, and a few others "convince" Stibbons to use Hex and go after him.

I know it has been a while for this to be updated, but since it isn't listed as complete. (although it does come to a nice stopping point for a short story) I would like to come across an update for it sometime.

Thanks for sharing!
Review By [JaCee] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from inqonehundredandone
Review:
An excellent story. Absolutely hilarious. I highly recommend it to everyone.
Review By [inqonehundredandone] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Bobboky
Review:
very very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Nice work. Wonder what their next attempt will be like.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [27 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from greenSkull
Review:
A funny story. Very entertaining over all.

On the latest chapter interaction between Buffy, Willow and Xander seems somewhat forced. It would have helped if you had added some questioning about how long they took and why it took this long. Or when exactly this happens in the Buffy time line.

And there are some setting errors, like calling Cheery Littlebottom, yes that is the name, "Cherry".

Or the seamstresses, they are an officially recognized guild, influental, powerfull and respected for that. The name is even so prevalent, that if you ask for a seamstress, people in Ankh-Morpork will direct you to Rosie Palm's girls.
You need to ask explicitly about mending clothes to get directions to an actual seamstress. And then the reaction is mostly, "oh, you mean the other kind." It goes so far that an actual seamstress has taken up residence with Rosie Palm for those misdirected cases. (There are some hints she may work as Rosie's personal bodyguard/hit man, too, but she doesn't entertain.)
Review By [greenSkull] • Date [26 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Gonadius
Review:
Very nifty story so far, always pleased to see an update... Even if I can't ever remember the name, the first chapter always brings it all back. Your writing doesn't quite match the style of the original loonyverse, but it WORKS.



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Hmmm?

Oh, nice job, keep it up.
Review By [Gonadius] • Date [26 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from wyrmlord
Review:
love it
Review By [wyrmlord] • Date [26 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great laugh, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL!

Xander still has a thing for short blonds I see.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [20 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from eriktheviking
Review:
The Carrot version of the shovel speech, great fun, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [9 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from MavenAlysse
Review:
This is GREAT!! Oh, wow! I love the Discworld and your rendition is spot-on. Thank you so much for sharing.

-MavenAlysse
Comments from author:
thank you!
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [8 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 5" from Tanydwr
Review:
Mental, which, considering it's Discworld, is probably about right.

One problem - Chapter 4, Death shouldn't have speech marks. He only speaks in small caps (capitals), no speech marks.

Good work. Xander/Cherry is inspired! And can we have some Xander and Carrot interaction? Because that would be brilliant...
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 5" from Dragonwolftiger
Review:
Please continue. I haven't laughed so much since I read my last Prachett book.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 5" from Richardthrnnsx
Review:
Bravo. A nice series of vignettes, the pizza battle bread is particularly inspired but is Cherry going to be X's soul-mate?

Thanks for sharing.
Review By [Richardthrnnsx] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 5" from Jackaniny
Review:
Xander the battle baker... That actually really fits him quite well.
Review By [Jackaniny] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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