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Review of chapter "Into the deep end" from Greywizard
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Personally, I'm wondering how the jet's pilot is going to write up his report of how his plane's wing was damaged. Probably something along the lines of being shot at by an anti-aircraft weapon concealed somewhere along the beach, which he and his fellow pilot bravely destroyed with their missiles. ;-)

Always nice to see more of this, man. ;-)
Comments from author:
But the first two jets weren't carrying missiles. Plus given Buffy's feelings that caused her to throw the piece of metal at the jets in the first place, I doubt she will lose any sleep over the paper work the pilot will have to deal with for letting The People's Property be damaged, regardless of how it happened in reality.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [20 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the deep end" from Gideon
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How come Buffy still gets all the interesting missions? There are lots of Slayers to choose from now! This sounds like something else the board of directors will need to investigate :)
And now Buffy has experienced being strafed by Fighter jets!
Cool chapter, getting Selina right into the action with a time critical mission and some bonding time with Buffy too, since they had to work together.
I did notice a couple of sentences getting a bit long and unwieldy towards the end of the chapter though.
Like this one which was three lines long and contained 4 commas!

"Once the Buddha was offloaded, the boat quickly headed back out, away from the island in a direction that was consistent with the one where they went out of line of sight with the fighter and that was suposedly further into South Korean territory, though the North Korean’s might refute that claim, but away from the direction the jet would take off from."
Comments from author:
Buffy brought Selina into the fold and it is only right for her to supervise her first foray into Special Acquisitions. However, I do believe she would have preferred to avoid the strafing.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [20 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the deep end" from (Past Donor)DonSample
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I'm hoping that whoever was driving the boat managed to avoid getting shot, and swam back to shore, but was too late to catch the flight and is now awaiting alternate transportation.
Review By [(Past Donor)DonSample] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the deep end" from (Past Donor)exiled
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Yay you updated! Wow, stealing from the PRK! That takes some guts! Nice update.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Can I Keep Her?" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Wonderful story, Selina is perfect for the Alexian Special Procurements Division.
I love what you are doing with this story!

I will be tracking this one.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Can I Keep Her?" from AriaDragoncrest
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Delightful
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Can I Keep Her?" from DeaconKrow
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Always fun to see another chapter of this series. Can't wait for more. Also, any chance for a new chapter for Fates of Love? :)
Review By [DeaconKrow] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Can I Keep Her?" from Tjack
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Always nice to see one of these pop up.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Can I Keep Her?" from FireWolfe
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I love this chapter. Selina is so in for it. I love Kathy and think she will make a great sidekick lol. Maybe even make Catwoman behave in a responsible manner as not to be a bad influence. I do hope there is more soon. I really love this series a lot. Love to see Buffy and Selena become better friends as well. I think they both would get each other in time.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Can I Keep Her?" from (Past Donor)exiled
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I love this continuation of the story! More please?
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Can I Keep Her?" from grd
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Too short, but still heart warming. Love her asking about a costume.
Review By [grd] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introduction to the Supernatural" from Rune
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Another good chapter to a very good story, please continue the great work you're doing.

Maybe this will end up with the Bat and the Cat getting together sometime?

Buffy can be a bridesmaid.
Review By [Rune] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introduction to the Supernatural" from grd
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That battle has truly shown how much Selina has grown. Bruce will not believe it. If this continues, maybe he can begin to actually trust her more.
Review By [grd] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introduction to the Supernatural" from Gideon
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Sometimes it is the simple things, good thinking by Selina there.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Did I get Myself Into?" from Gideon
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Fighting with Buffy when in Buffy's home territory = not smart! I don't think Selina will enjoy what happens next :) I hope they can come to a ceasefire before they have to work together.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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