Yay! Its an update...I'm glad that you've come back to this and can't wait to read more of this!

REALLY hoping you decide to start updating again! I like the fic, and I cannot wait to see what the clan does make of "Wisp." (love the name) Not to mention what they'll make of Demona and Wisp having to smother laughter every time they look at Lexington.

Hehe. Not bad. Not bad at all.

Defintaly like this story...I really hope you come back to it because I'd love to read more!

This is for the whole story. The story is a little more realistic than the other one entitled Willow Destrine.

Great job on this story so far, please do your best to add more soon.

Pleasant story (read: light on emotions). All the characters seem to be taking *everything* in with either a grain of salt, or without any emotional depth whatsoever. It's like reading about people who are over-drugged on Prozac.

A couple of typos but still a good story. I was sort of expecting them to have to demonstrate magic to Willow's mother a bit more than they did. I'm looking forward to seeing how the clan views her though. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

I felt that the magic demonstrated was sufficient to prove their point. Most of the typos have been adressed and will be corrected soon.

The whole idea of Sheila becoming a caring mother, bonding with Dominique, and accepting a joint custody arrangement is just too alien a concept for me. Given the story we're talking about, that's saying something.


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response to author response:
I'm not saying the writing was bad....I'm just saying that the concept of Sheila as a caring mother and then bonding with Demona is just too bizarre. I think this is the very first fic I've ever read in which Sheila has been presented in this light. And the thought that Demona could bond with a full human (and possible competitor for Willow) so soon after forsaking her centuries-old vendetta against human-kind is just ookey. I know that ice-cream is powerful magic, but...c'mon!

Alternate reality or suspension of belief is one thing...ok, two things...but this, this, this "wrong-ness" is another. :)

Be reasonable, here. This is fanfiction, and thus at least slightly AU. If it weren't going to remain somewhat close to canon, I'd add AU to the tags, but there you go.

A little suspension of disbelief would be nice. Who wouldn't agree to joint custody when the alternative is no interaction and possible arrest? And there is more at work here than is obvious at the moment.

So Willows human parents will be sharing joint custody... interesting twist there. Like your interaction between Willow and Demona/Dominique. Plus how you had Willow and Dawn acting made me think that Dawn kind of looked at Willow as a big sister.

Wisp's Gargoyle body is looking to be hell on wings in combat... looking forward to see her really cutting loose.

Wispr

PS... hopefully you wont have the trouble I do in remembering to leave off the "r" when writing "Wisp." ;)

I can honestly say that the 'r' is never a problem when typing 'Wisp'

And yes, Willow's body is hell on wings. The problem will be with non-lethal combat. And she'll still need training.

Dawn and Willow will have the closest non-familial, non-sexual(ish) relationship in the story to date. On the other hand, my definition of family in this thing are rather broad.

Cute story, and a cute ending for chapter 2. I'd like very much to see where this goes and future gargoyle interactions.

It would be incredibly helpful to see a sketch or something of Willow's gargoyle form. Plus, if Willow's new contacts and powers allowed her to help Oz control his Wolf form to its fullest, they could potentially have an amazing relationship that included night prowls, heheh.

Anyway, can't wait to see how the story develops. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.

I am enjoying your story a lot. With Dawn there, I can see your story is now taking off on its own. I like the various characterizations so far and look forward to Willow's meeting with the rest of the Clan. I would like a few more scenes of Willow the Gargoyle killing a few more demons. She is obviously a Hellmouth Gargoyle and I'd like to see her kick some demonic butts in her own special way. Lol!

A really good chapter, I'm really finding it fascinating the differences you have for your Gargoyle Willow story line. Can't wait to see how you write the parents reactions.

Good job!

Wispr

I find it interesting that Dawn is around. I'm looking forward to more chapters in your story.

Fun stuff. I really like this story so far. But, then again, I always was a big Gargoyles fan. I also always thought that Demona was one of the more tragic characters on the show. Centuries of persecution and hatred are very hard to overcome just on normal human terms. But when you have someone who has lived it for centuries, that is even harder. I hope that your story works toward a reconciliation between Demona and the Clan. After all, Willow can be pretty persuasive. Of course, if Xander finds out the situation, his heart may help things along as well. Dawn should be more careful what she wishes for. If Puck finds out what she wants, he would probaby do it for her, just for the chaos alone. I wonder what Puck would think of Ethan? As for the Clan, she might have more in common with Lexington, but Brooklyn would probably fit her better.

Puck is still bound by Oberon's orders. No matter how much she annoys Owen Burnett, he can't use magic unless he's teaching or protecting Alexander.

And the comment about getting along with Lex had more to do with their interests leading to a friendship than any attempt at foreshadowing a relationship. I also can't see Brooklyn getting over her being Demona's daughter anytime soon. Angela had Goliath as a father to balance it out, but Willow does not. Puck would probably think of Ethen as a hack; Puck has a more refined taste in chaos.

Please note that any of this may change at any moment. ^-^