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Review of chapter "Midnight Meetings" from KingHenrytheV
Cute story, and a cute ending for chapter 2. I'd like very much to see where this goes and future gargoyle interactions.

It would be incredibly helpful to see a sketch or something of Willow's gargoyle form. Plus, if Willow's new contacts and powers allowed her to help Oz control his Wolf form to its fullest, they could potentially have an amazing relationship that included night prowls, heheh.

Anyway, can't wait to see how the story develops. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [17 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Midnight Meetings" from CPTSkip
I am enjoying your story a lot. With Dawn there, I can see your story is now taking off on its own. I like the various characterizations so far and look forward to Willow's meeting with the rest of the Clan. I would like a few more scenes of Willow the Gargoyle killing a few more demons. She is obviously a Hellmouth Gargoyle and I'd like to see her kick some demonic butts in her own special way. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Midnight Meetings" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
A really good chapter, I'm really finding it fascinating the differences you have for your Gargoyle Willow story line. Can't wait to see how you write the parents reactions.

Good job!

Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [16 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Midnight Meetings" from MistofRainbows
I find it interesting that Dawn is around. I'm looking forward to more chapters in your story.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [16 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Midnight Meetings" from Fyrloche
Fun stuff. I really like this story so far. But, then again, I always was a big Gargoyles fan. I also always thought that Demona was one of the more tragic characters on the show. Centuries of persecution and hatred are very hard to overcome just on normal human terms. But when you have someone who has lived it for centuries, that is even harder. I hope that your story works toward a reconciliation between Demona and the Clan. After all, Willow can be pretty persuasive. Of course, if Xander finds out the situation, his heart may help things along as well. Dawn should be more careful what she wishes for. If Puck finds out what she wants, he would probaby do it for her, just for the chaos alone. I wonder what Puck would think of Ethan? As for the Clan, she might have more in common with Lexington, but Brooklyn would probably fit her better.
Comments from author:
Puck is still bound by Oberon's orders. No matter how much she annoys Owen Burnett, he can't use magic unless he's teaching or protecting Alexander.

And the comment about getting along with Lex had more to do with their interests leading to a friendship than any attempt at foreshadowing a relationship. I also can't see Brooklyn getting over her being Demona's daughter anytime soon. Angela had Goliath as a father to balance it out, but Willow does not. Puck would probably think of Ethen as a hack; Puck has a more refined taste in chaos.

Please note that any of this may change at any moment. ^-^
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [16 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from MisterD
I heard you posted on two sites?
What is the other site?
Comments from author:
The other site is, under the same psuedonym. I suppose I could post on ficwad and MediaMiner as well, but I haven't used those ones as much. I'll add a note if that changes at any point.
Review By [MisterD] • Date [12 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from blackcanary
i think that i am going to like this one. please update soon.
Review By [blackcanary] • Date [11 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from MistofRainbows
An interesting take on changing Willow into a gargoyle.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [10 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from Fyrloche
Interesting start. I like it and will be looking forward to more.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from draconis
I totally agree with Wispr.
Review By [draconis] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Halloween" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Really good start to your story! I like your idea of retractable wing blades. The differences you have with your Gargoyle Willow are very fascinating and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Good work!

Comments from author:
First review... on two separate sites, and its from the author of my inspiration. Sweet. Anyways, the differences have not all been made apparent yet. Alright, so there's really one real physiological difference left, but still. Hellmouth Gargoyles rule. Unless they're not trying for submission and not fatality, at least.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [9 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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