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Review of chapter "Two" from RabidReject
Review:
Awesome chapter. Can't wait to read more!
Review By [RabidReject] • Date [16 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two" from tazandhooch
Review:
I love your dialogue! Not knowing what Satsu sounds like only slightly impairs my enjoyment of this fic but their conversations just flow beautifully. And funny! Yay! And again, you show just how well you write Buffy as a character, getting her insecurities as well as her strengths. Thankyou for this story!
Comments from author:
I love it when people say they like my dialogue, so thank you many times for saying so. :-) I know, it's killing me not to know Satsu's voice. I feel like I'm flying blind here. LOL.

I need more comics.
Review By [tazandhooch] • Date [16 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two" from Javian
Review:
Love your stories, great start.
Comments from author:
Much appreciated. :D
Review By [Javian] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Two" from SailAweigh
Review:
Great first two chapters. Buffy sounds very Buffyish (especially the remark about the hair, heh.) I like the way you're developing Satsu based on your observation of the comics. You've picked up on a lot of stuff that just passed me by (I know nothing of ska or how to recognize a fan.) I wouldn't worry too much about the comic storyline, getting Jossed is always the chance you have to take writing fanfic. Take this story where you want it to go and I'm sure we'll all enjoy it, it's very believable.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I know I probably am going to get Jossed as far as plot, but I'd like to weave it in if I can at points, plus Satsu backstory would be nice. (I've made up my own, but...) Anyways, thanks. :-)
Review By [SailAweigh] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two" from CPTSkip
Review:
My goodness, this is turning out to be a terrific story. It is so nice to see Buffy as just a girl who isn't sure of everything and not the superhero who can take on all the Forces of Hell and win. Besides, I think they make a very cute couple. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One" from zigpal
Review:
Great start. I'm not familiar with the comic, but you said you would splainy, so I'll wait and see how things develop before being more thorough with my feedback.
Comments from author:
I said I would explain? Heh. Um, well, I'll do my best through the course of the story, but I really would recommend catching yourself up on 'em, zig. There's transcripts on the net if you don't wanna buy 'em. :-)
Review By [zigpal] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One" from paradocs
Review:
Hello,
A pleasant tease. Very happy you started this; I only recently read the appropriate material and I was pleasantly shocked. Of course, it doesn't mean much yet, or at all, but there are another 28? issues to go so . . . All I can say is, glad Marti Noxon
isn't a writer.
I can't say much more than 'thanks' and I'll keep checking for updates -- this was the break I needed after writing 3 particularly dark chapters of my own.
Happy Writing,
Paradocs (Shawn)
Comments from author:
Appreciate it, Shawn, thank you. :-)
Review By [paradocs] • Date [14 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Awww! The two are just so cute together. This is the first fanfic I've read based on the "eighth season". And I like it. Your Buffy sounded very Buffyish. I hope you continue this story just as I hope Joss keeps working on the Slayers' relationship in the comics. Let me add just one more, "Awww!"
Comments from author:
Awwww, thanks. :-)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One" from gleeky
Review:
Great first chapter, I've been waiting for someone to write this pairing, loved it, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I was waiting too. Joss handed us a maintext femslash pairing...for BUFFY...and no one's jumping on it. Maybe they know something I don't. Ha.

Thanks. :-)
Review By [gleeky] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One" from BrowncoatRebel
Review:
Woot!
Good first chapter, especially considering how little we actually know about Satsu. I was kind of under the impression she was Japanese-American because she doesn't seem to struggle with english but I guess accents don't come across well in print so she might just be Japanese. It was nice that you followed straight from the end of issue 11. I can imagine that it'll be difficult to write this fic with new comics coming out every month but if canon Satsu ends up throwing a huge wrench in this fic I hope that won't stop you from writing it anyway. I'll definitely be following this story as you write it regardless of canon.

On a slightly off topic note, I spent an hour trying to hunt down something by Kemuri. I found some videos on youtube pretty quickly and the band is awesome so I spent the rest of the hour trying to hunt down a torrent or rapidshare/megaupload link. Wow they were hard to find but they're a great ska band I've never heard before so their inclusion gets your fic some bonus awesome points.
Comments from author:
I thought she was probably Japanese-American too, until I took a closer look at her "slayer activation" panel in "A Beautiful Sunset." I could still be wrong, but the uniform she was wearing is a Japanese school uniform. I did some Googling. Also, I got the Ska thing from one of the buttons she wears on her slayer-gear in one of the comics--"Rude Girl," it says. Apparently, it's slang for a fan of Ska music.

I'm trying to get clues into who Satsu is from anywhere I can at this point. Yeah, it'll be interesting with the comics. I don't know if Joss will do anything with them or if Drew Goddard is just gonna kill Satsu when they go to Japan next arc. I hope not. I hope she gets a big role and I get to learn about her, because it'll really help. It'd also really help if I knew knew how she was supposed to sound. That's killing me. Anyways....

I stumbled across Kemuri looking for Ska bands that Satsu might like, and yeah, they are good.
Review By [BrowncoatRebel] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One" from Tempi
Review:
Excellent chapter. I hope to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Happy you think so....:-)
Review By [Tempi] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One" from RabidReject
Review:
good stuff. I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Me too...oh, wait, I have to write, don't I? Crap. ;-) Thanks.
Review By [RabidReject] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One" from gigi
Review:
Wow! A new story and one with Buffy/Satsu. I never see those ever. It's refreshing. I really hope you continue this and update soon.
Comments from author:
I found one from Cadence K on livejournal. Great little shortfic. Thank you for reading. :-)
Review By [gigi] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One" from KnightWulf
Review:
liked the chapter a lot hope you update soon
Comments from author:
I'll do my bestest, thanks, :-D
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One" from Jezzibel
Review:
I just want to say...Awwwwwwww

This is so sweet, so cute. I can't wait to see more...
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. :-)
Review By [Jezzibel] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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