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Review of chapter "The Graveyard" from VillageOrchid
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Good reveal: The prodigy of the Summers family, the twelve year old freshman, was going into the foster care system until a ‘permanent guardian’ was found.

Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I'm Sorry" from VillageOrchid
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So Dawn's a freshman and the others are juniors or seniors in your modified time scale?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from VillageOrchid
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Interesting idea... you got to the point with the AU elements, but not too much storytelling beyond the outline of it so far. Looking forward to seeing how it plays out.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "RoadTrip- The car" from djhardim
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Roughly you have:

SG-1 SG-Scooby
Jack Xander
Samantha Willow
Daniel Dawn
Teal'c Buffy
Review By [djhardim] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from neverwill
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Sorry to see you'll be reverting to drabbles. It would be nice if the drabbles were at least in either linear order or closer to the previous action so we get the loose story line. This last chapter, though amusing, was totally unconnected to the previous bits.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "RoadTrip- The car" from ArjaiH
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Sadly I wish that you had stuck with a serio/humorous story line, rather than doing this as drabbles. Random bits of humor do not a story make. Lose of interest is inevitable.
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "RoadTrip- The car" from Ironfelix
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The original writing of this story was much better. Now it just jumps around and has no meaning. Go back to the old format you were writing it in , was better.
Review By [Ironfelix] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A daughter?" from jessie
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Good start. I can't wait for more!
Review By [jessie] • Date [22 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A daughter?" from Intermundia
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I absolutely love your voice, the descriptive language & the dialogue for being concise and not overdone.
I believe this story can give me something. It can be beautiful if continued & filled with emotions and feelings.
Review By [Intermundia] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A daughter?" from Mwhahahaha
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This is a good start to the story...I can't wait to see what you write next!
Review By [Mwhahahaha] • Date [19 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A daughter?" from slightlyeccentric
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I can't wait to see the meeting between the Scoobies and Jack, I hope that you update again soon!
Review By [slightlyeccentric] • Date [22 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A daughter?" from Bobboky
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good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A daughter?" from Blkwoman
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Liking the story, but what happened? There were more chapters than 4 the other day. One seems to be missing.
Review By [Blkwoman] • Date [22 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of story "Starting Over" from CJNyfalt
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The first chapter was kind of weak, but the rest is good and looks promising.
Review By [CJNyfalt] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Starting Over" from neverwill
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Glad to see this back again. Looking forward to new chapters.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10] • Add Comment
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