So Dawn's a freshman and the others are juniors or seniors in your modified time scale?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting idea... you got to the point with the AU elements, but not too much storytelling beyond the outline of it so far. Looking forward to seeing how it plays out.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "RoadTrip- The car" from djhardim
Review:
Roughly you have:
SG-1 SG-Scooby Jack Xander Samantha Willow Daniel Dawn Teal'c Buffy
Review By [djhardim] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Sorry to see you'll be reverting to drabbles. It would be nice if the drabbles were at least in either linear order or closer to the previous action so we get the loose story line. This last chapter, though amusing, was totally unconnected to the previous bits.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Sadly I wish that you had stuck with a serio/humorous story line, rather than doing this as drabbles. Random bits of humor do not a story make. Lose of interest is inevitable.
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "RoadTrip- The car" from Ironfelix
Review:
The original writing of this story was much better. Now it just jumps around and has no meaning. Go back to the old format you were writing it in , was better.
Review By [Ironfelix] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Not Rated
I absolutely love your voice, the descriptive language & the dialogue for being concise and not overdone. I believe this story can give me something. It can be beautiful if continued & filled with emotions and feelings.
Review By [Intermundia] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Mmm. Not a'toll bad. Can't wait to see what happens when you get to the point of where Daniel and the Scoobies (especially their two resident brainiacs). Btw, not sure, may've missed this in the reading somehow, but where is/what happened to Giles?
