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Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Passing the Torch" from (Recent Donor)draconin
Review:
This was wonderfully written and you had me in tears. Even though I can see why you ended it the way you did, it cries out to become the core of a series where you look at Kate/Willow, some cases where BtVS crossed via Kate with NCIS and even perhaps looking at Gibbs working with Giles. Those two would get on like a house on fire, as would Xander and Tony.
Comments from author:
It's an interesting concept. I may revisit it at a later time. For now, I'm too busy with my five other WIPs. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Passing the Torch" from zigpal
Review:
Even though it is a sad story of loss, it is a well written one. You had me right beside Willow and Kate while they were at the Bronze, and your Gibbs was spot on. Well done all around.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [zigpal] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Passing the Torch" from (Recent Donor)CaptainBoulanger
Review:
Very good one - though perhaps Willow should have offered to help arrange getting the boat out when the time comes, something non-specific like "I might have an idea or two, let me get back to you"...

Also, as carpenters, I think Gibbs and Xander might connect rather well (in a just-friends way of course)...
Review By [(Recent Donor)CaptainBoulanger] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Passing the Torch" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Okay, not nice to make me get all misty eyed in the middle of the afternoon, but this is such a lovely, touching story! The way you gave closure to all three of the characters was beautifully done.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Sorry to make you all teary. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Passing the Torch" from feekh
Review:
That made my cry. Beautifully written and Kate's decision to face her death head on was awe-inspiring.
Comments from author:
Thank you. :) Sorry I made you cry. *Passes tissues*
Review By [feekh] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Passing the Torch" from CPTSkip
Review:
This is a great story. But I get tears in my eyes each time I read it. Well done.
Comments from author:
Aww. Thank you.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Passing the Torch" from YademosEbyam
Review:
This is one of the best "reconcilation with tragedy" stories I've ever read. The idea that Kate knew what she was facing in advance, but chose to face it anyway, was a stunning but altogether believable plot twist. I'm usually leary of non-canon slash relationships, but this one was handled with dignity and tact. Thank you for a wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing - I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Passing the Torch" from war
Review:
good story.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [war] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: The Instrument of My Destruction" from BraveLittleToaster
Review:
Great story you portray the characters really well. Keep writing!
Review By [BraveLittleToaster] • Date [29 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: The Instrument of My Destruction" from Wormbait
Review:
Very nice story, don't know how I missed it before now.

Hope you get around to continuing it soon.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [22 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: The Instrument of My Destruction" from Dreamweaver
Review:
Good story. But, what I really wanted to say was kudos to the choice of title. "Incense and Gunpowder". I love it. Don't really know why, but just wanted to let you know.
Comments from author:
Thank you! ^_^
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: The Instrument of My Destruction" from war
Review:
should be interesting to see if Willow goes all black eyr again.if she does i think Ari won't be around very long.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you! :)
Review By [war] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: The Instrument of My Destruction" from HunterH
Review:
OH! That was just sad:( Can't wait to read more :)
Comments from author:
More will come soon! (Sooner than for Chaos Theory, anyway....)
Review By [HunterH] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: The Instrument of My Destruction" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
Heartbreaking. I teared up reading it.
Comments from author:
*passes tissues*
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: The Instrument of My Destruction" from CPTSkip
Review:
I really hate prophesies. As soon as Kate gets hit in the vest, she needs to STAY DOWN! OK, I feel better now. I look forward to your next update to see if Kate bites the big one or not.

Edit: I knew that. I was in a deep state of denial. Lol!
Comments from author:
*points backward to part 2 of this series to indicate that Kate did in fact bite the big one*

Edit: LOL I don't blame you. I pretty much live in that state unless I'm actually watching a later-season episode. Otherwise, Kate lives!!!!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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