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Review of chapter "The Spoils of War" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
Love the practicality of their actions.
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [15 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Spoils of War" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Love how you are blending the two of them into the storyline. Good work on the salvaging scene!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [15 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Spoils of War" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
I like that Dawn and Faith are not finding the Fellowship on landing, doing practical things to keep themselves together that you or I would do if we had just a little survival knowledge, and reacting the way you would expect if marooned in an unknown place. This story is very well done, so far.

Tracey
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [15 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Learning Curve" from cary
Review:
Interesting. Keep going.
Review By [cary] • Date [6 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Learning Curve" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Really keeping this story interesting. Like the Dawn and Faith interaction.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [5 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Learning Curve" from TonyTheJew
Review:
You know Dawn would know so magic even if it is simple spell. After all how many magic user has she know. How many magic book could she have got when she was young and had nothing to do? And she is/was the The Key and some thing like that has a lot of power even if it is a small part lift over.
up-date soon
Comments from author:
Dawn may know some simple magic, but certainly not enough to get them back. And the Key does have power, but having the power and knowing how to use it are two different things...
Review By [TonyTheJew] • Date [5 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Learning Curve" from AllenPitt
Review:
should be plenty to find... though if they take any items that are recognizable ie have crests on them etc, could get awkward later on ie "Hey, that's Uncle Frim's Helmet!" etc..
Comments from author:
There is plenty to find, and some of what they find will lead to a bit of awkwardness when they finally encounter other people.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Morning After" from becuzitswrong
Review:
I enjoyed the story. Very solid character development. Sad to see Buffy die, but then she was irrelevent to this story anyway. Hopefully, Dawn will be okay. 8)
Review By [becuzitswrong] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Morning After" from Shezzi
Review:
Nice chapter...very well written! please update soon! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Shezzi] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Morning After" from AllenPitt
Review:
If they're luck the war of the ring hasn't started yet... as long as they avoid attracting attention, Sauron & company are all focused on finding the Ring... though I suppose her being the Key would be 'interesting'...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rude awakenings" from Shezzi
Review:
Very nice start...and Mordor, that's original! :) good job! nice amount of suspense, info and snarky-ness. Please update soon! I wanna know what happens next! love xx Shezzi
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Shezzi] • Date [25 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rude awakenings" from grasshopperknight
Review:
nice start. very original drop off point. can't wait to see what's next. keep it up.
Comments from author:
Thanks! (If the story continues to flow the way it has so far, you shouldn't have long to wait.)
Review By [grasshopperknight] • Date [25 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rude awakenings" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Have to say you really got my attention and I'm looking forward to see where you going with this.

Wispr
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it! I hope you'll enjoy where it goes.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rude awakenings" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
Interesting place for them to get dropped off. I like it!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rude awakenings" from SilverWave
Review:
Very interesting...
although killing Buffy was bad ;)

Thanks :)
Comments from author:
Killing Buffy was bad, but it means that this will definitely be Faith and Dawn's show, no Buffy moving heaven and earth to get them out of their predicament.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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