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Review of chapter "The Green And The White" from Gideon
Review:
Great to see an update. The first of many more I hope :)
I'm glad Dawn has learned a little more about her origins but it is sad she doesn't remember and therefore it isn't much use to her yet. Hopefully that will change. I'm sure she will love riding to the rescue with Gandalf's reinforcements though - Faith will be jealous. I wonder what Gandalf will feel like to Faith?
Comments from author:
Thanks! Updates should be a little more regular now that I've finally gotten this chapter up.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Green And The White" from PATM
Review:
Great reading! A real gift to find it updated so I read the previous four chapters to catch up and it all works together. The connection to another story that I enjoy reading is a wonderful surprise.
Review By [PATM] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Green And The White" from Angbard
Review:
This is, as always, excellent writing! Please update soon!
Review By [Angbard] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Green And The White" from AllenPitt
Review:
hm. If she's that old, I wonder if she had anything to do with the creation of the slayer line?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [17 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Green And The White" from DarthPayne
Review:
Aww, i want to keep reading.

Don't take too long in writing the next chapter. :)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [17 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Green And The White" from HananeELmokkadem
Review:
Awesome!!!!
Thanks for posting.
I can't wait to see what happens next, and I would love to read Faith kick some ass.
I'm sure there will be a lot of surprised faces at that sight.
Do you have any plans to hook people up?
xxx Hanane
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [17 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Green And The White" from JoeDineen
Review:
Unexpected twist that, interesting development. I am glad you are updating this again.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [17 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Cranky Cavalry" from bucksavage
Review:
Well....It's actually been quite a while since I read this fic, so I'm not too sure where I left off, the only clear image i have is of one of the chapters mention a poofy dress....which was really funny by the way. I must say though, that from what I re-read, you have got the LOTR-verse pretty well down, and the characterizations are well done. Nice work!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm hoping to get the story going again soon, I know it's been quite a while since an update- I've been blocked something fierce on the next chapter.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [31 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Cranky Cavalry" from Nosi
Review:
A great chapter. I loved all of Faith's musings throughout and it's so refreshing to see this scene with Faith in, rather than the usual Buffy or Dawn.

And a great chapter title too.

Sorry to take so long to get around to reviewing.
Comments from author:
No worries, it's taking me a while too. Thanks for the review!
Review By [Nosi] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Cranky Cavalry" from Bluejello
Review:
I stumbled upon this story through a rec-list, and I'm glad I did!
You've handled Dawn and Faith's characters very well, and worked them into the LotR events without it seeming too convenient. I'd love to see what else you have planned!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I've been blocked on the next chapter for a while, but I'm hoping to get it flowing again soon (provided I get the writing time...)
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Cranky Cavalry" from Gideon
Review:
I'm thinking that Faith will have a lot of opportunities to say "I told you so" to Aragorn.
Comments from author:
Won't she just?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [20 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Cranky Cavalry" from AbeEllis
Review:
Nice story!
I liked especially how you painted Faths character in regards to her clothes.

b.t.w. are we going to see something of the "Buffy-Universe" (is Buffy truly dead or just wounded how did the Scoobies react to Faiths and Dawns disappearance...)?

Please update soon!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks!

There will not be any Buffy folks riding to the rescue- Buffy is truly dead. And to the rest of the Slayers on scene in the beginning, it looked like Dawn and Faith died closing a portal. Willow won't invoke magic to look for them if she thinks Dawn and Faith are dead, not after how that worked out when she resurrected Buffy.

I'm afraid I may disappoint on the 'update soon' front- my schedule over the next few months is pretty crowded, and writing time will unfortunately be a rare commodity. But don't worry, I'm not abandoning the story.
Review By [AbeEllis] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Cranky Cavalry" from Eureka
Review:
I love this story! Dawn AND Faith in Middle Earth! I'm really hoping that you can get a new chapter out soon, but I know that RL and other stories that you have written will stick their heads in..
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Sadly, at the moment it's mostly RL keeping me from making much progress, and that's likely to last the next couple of months. :(
Review By [Eureka] • Date [18 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It Must Be Tuesday" from (Past Donor)Joyful
Review:
this is just a little comment about something I noticed earlier. You sayd that when the hobbits were captured they lost their weapons. That means that Merry & Pippin no longer have the barrow-blades, which means that when Merry & Eowyn face the Witch-King later on, they will have no way of killing him. Just felt like pointing that out. I suppose you could have Aragorn or GImli find the weapons around the pile od dead orcs & save them, if you wanted?
Comments from author:
Don't worry, the hobbits (and Dawn) will get their weapons back eventually. I would never take Eowyn's big moment away, seeing as it's one of my favorites in the entire saga.
Review By [(Past Donor)Joyful] • Date [3 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Cranky Cavalry" from (Past Donor)Joyful
Review:
oh. come on! you can't end it there! More please.
Comments from author:
More coming just as soon as I can manage it! (I'm stuck on a particularly tricky bit right now.)
Review By [(Past Donor)Joyful] • Date [3 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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