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Review of chapter "Prebattle Jitters" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! I love your fracking story. All the little mini-crosses just amuse the heck out of me. This is rapidly becoming one of my favorite crossover stories that constantly makes my grin and laugh as I read. You did make one mistake, I think. You write: "like one of her instructors at West Point". Holy afterburners Batman, but I think your mean "the Air Force Academy" not Hudson High.

Edit: I must say how much I enjoyed the Snake monologing when he should have been Blowing Things Up Real Good.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prebattle Jitters" from Hecatonchires
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I'm liking. And zentraedi names? Cool.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [2 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prebattle Jitters" from theraceskong
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Nice chapter. I really liked the SAAB nod. I can't wait til the next chapter.
Review By [theraceskong] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prebattle Jitters" from Mcspender
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Damn it man!
A brand new ship and Joan manages to crash her in her maiden trip, and yep, the paint job is Definitely Ruined.

Cool chapter!.
See ya!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Satori
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"Grr. Argh." mehehehe.

Goa'uld monologing. Reponsible for the decline of the Goa'uld Civilization since 1995.

Keep up the great stuff.
Review By [Satori] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prebattle Jitters" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
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Thus confirming my opinion that God is an evil, manipulative, bastard (except, not having any parents, not in the technical sense.)

The only way that collision could have happened is if God deliberately manipulated things to make it happen, so unless some other miracle took place to ensure that there were no casualties because of it, all injuries are directly on God's head.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prebattle Jitters" from ReadsaLot
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I like the "Robotech" nod with the character names. Great story - can't wait to see the next chapter.
Review By [ReadsaLot] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prebattle Jitters" from SlowMercury
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This is brilliant! And hilarious! I especially love the way God schlepped Joan's family onto her starship. And how Joan's captaining a starship in the first place. Awesome.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Satori
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And now I remember why I'm such a huge fan of your work. All those little reference done with just the right hint of humor. The SGC has found krypton, no?

Great idea with the mini-gate.
Review By [Satori] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2 - Family matters" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
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Okay, I hope that those minigates are kept in a *really* good vacuum.

Since you've got yourself a pretty much perfect mass->energy conversion unit, forget the ZPM, and just use a couple of minigates as your power supply.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 2 - Family matters" from MarcusRowland
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For some reason I'm wondering what Joan would have said if she was at UC Sunnydale during the S4 halloween episode and happened to run into Oz.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 2 - Family matters" from BrendanM
Review:
[blinks]

Wow... I'm glad I found you again...

This is a neat idea. Keep up the good work!
Review By [BrendanM] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Flavia
Review:
Now *this*.......could be *fun*. One
of those crossovers you -not *you* you, of course, people you-
wouldn't ever think about, but once
you read it, it gives you *such* ideas.....

Uhm.......(grin)

Flavia
Review By [Flavia] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
I like your story. It is an interesting, and up until now unknown to me, crossover. I also like some of the 'throwaway' crosses mentioned. I look forward to more of this story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamJames
Review:
Very interesting set up. It's great to see more Joan of Arcadia fics and I don't think I've seen any adult Joan stories. But isn't she rather young to be captain of her own ship?

I see Joan and God still haven't figured out an identification code. Of course, from the other officers' reactions it seems God doesn't need one.

Good start. I look forward to reading the rest.
Review By [SamJames] • Date [28 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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