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Life and Times of Dawn Summers, College Student

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Review of story "Life and Times of Dawn Summers, College Student" from Anonymous Reviewer
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hehe, cheese dreams! The latin sleep-talking was great. I espcially like the charaterization of Joe and Methos. The two that always claim they stay out the way with their meddling suggestions. Although the fencing idea does sound interesting. As usual you mix in enough mentions of the past while not going over board and keeping focused on the present. I'm getting really curious about how Dawn and Richie might find out each other's secret. Great story.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [21 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Life and Times of Dawn Summers, College Student" from Anonymous Reviewer
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LOL at Slay Face, that's great. Very clever juxtaposition of the two paranormal lives, as well as Dawn witnessing the sword fights. Would love to see Richie show her how to fight; I'm sure she'll be a natural. Nice conversations between Methos and Joe, old meddlesome men. Very enjoyable chapter.

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Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [21 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Life and Times of Dawn Summers, College Student" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I just stumbled across this story, and it was a very happy accident. I love your characterization of Dawn. She's still very much herself, but with a newly acquired confidence and maturity. It feels like a perfectly logical continuation of the direction she was going in season 7. The portrayal of her relationship with the Scoobies (especially Buffy) was lovely. The Highlander folks are excellent as well. I was so happy to see Methos crop up in Part 3.

I'm definitely looking forward to the next part.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [17 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Life and Times of Dawn Summers, College Student" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Well drafted story, which doesn't immediately jump in with I'm a Key, My sister's a slayer etc etc - nice to see you taking your time - look forward to more.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [15 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Life and Times of Dawn Summers, College Student" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Ah Methos arrived! I find it interesting that Dawn reminded him of Alexa. Andrew and Sunnydale Monopoly? (what's next, Sunndydale D&D? :P ) and Robin Wood as the "overprotective father with mother issues?" Those two details were great and just right. What I loved the most was the bit about Dawn and diaries, especially because it's a Methos habit too!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [15 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Life and Times of Dawn Summers, College Student" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I love this story!!! It is so great! Please keep posting more :)
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [15 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Life and Times of Dawn Summers, College Student" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Very interesting chapter. Liked Methos researching Dawn- it fits well with his scholar researcher persona. LOL at thinking up names for Faith's child, and the thought of vampires knowing better than to take on an over hormoned slayer. Nicely worked so all the individual parts fit well together. Enjoyable all around.

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Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [15 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Life and Times of Dawn Summers, College Student" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I really liked this second chapter too! You make the introduction of new characters to Dawn very seamless. I also enjoyed the description of the class when MacLeod asked a question (very true) and the last transition! Keep up the great work!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [11 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Life and Times of Dawn Summers, College Student" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Yes a sequel is definately in order. Hope to read more soon.

Hasta La Bye Byez,

MIchele
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [10 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Life and Times of Dawn Summers, College Student" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Very good! More, more!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [5 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Life and Times of Dawn Summers, College Student" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Well written - look forward to more.
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Review of story "Life and Times of Dawn Summers, College Student" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I'm very glad that beta reader convinced you to write more, because I really enjoyed this story and I'd love to read more! I especially liked Dawn's going away party with Andrew and the SITs.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [5 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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