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Review of chapter "Prologue" from Jorrie
Review:
Wow! This is fascinating! Your writing style is very...what's the word. Well, it's clear and pulls the reader in. I like it a lot. It's like you're really telling a story. Some authors don't tell stories very well. They just give the facts in a very bland, straight forward kind of way. I really like this beginning. I'm very interested in reading more. Please update. I'm not above begging if it helps to get you to consider writing another chapter! I'll be on the look out. ^_~
Comments from author:
I like to consider my writing style... oblique. I'm really happy that I've managed to draw you in and hook your interest, and while begging is not required - it is certainly pleasing.

I hope you can wait a little longer, I'm trying to edit the next chapter at the mo - but I'm finding it very slow going. Editing is *not* my strong suit.
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [30 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from DistressingDamsel
Review:
Good begining - hope to see more soon. Look up the author jennifer, she's done a good BtVS/Doom x-over (can't remember what it's called off the top of my head) You should check it out...
Comments from author:
Thanks for the tip, I'll check it soon.

I'm planning to post the next chapter in a few weeks, hope you can wait that long.
Review By [DistressingDamsel] • Date [9 Mar 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from ChloeWinchester
Review:
This is interesting. I can't wait to read more. Is there gonna be a pairing?
Comments from author:
Glad you think so.

No pairings yet, but the story rewrites itself every so often, so - you never know.
Review By [ChloeWinchester] • Date [1 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Very interesting beginning
Comments from author:
Thanks, I did my best :-)
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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