I like this. You could probably take it further and make a full story out of it.

This is the whole story, I think.

:D

Is that good?

Thank You Joe!!! I am glad to see you have not lost your touch. I just wish this story could go for a couple more chapters.

Maybe, maybe not.

Hey, This story has awesome potential one thing I noticed is that you mentioned that Harmony was ugly, but in the TV show she was not.

here is a picture http://tviv.org/Buffy_the_Vampire_Slayer/Harmony_Kendall

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

Or the beerholder, if you drink enough.

Lol! Yet another nice story from Wacky Joe. And another story that came across more as a sweet romantic story than a crack story. But what happened to Buffy? Joe, did you go and kill Buffy again? Lol!

<.<

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I ain't admitting nothing.

You know, for YAHF, this one is made of win. 100% win, in fact. The win-ness is threatening to burst loose from it's container, much like Cordelia threatens to bust out of...er, yeah. Anyway. Short, sweet, entertaining. And with 50% more lesbians than the average YAHF, unless you're Joe. Which you are. So it all works out. I just wish there was a Zatanna to get into a catfight with Cordy-Selina-Catwoman over Xander-Batman, because hey, nothing like make up making out after a good catfight.

I should SO not review after midnight.

I'd say 100% more lesbians. The average YAHF is sadly lesbian-free. :(

A very nice adaptation of Batman, the Animated Series that used to show on Fox and is now on Toon Disney. I like the fact that you used Harley Quinn and Poison Ivy for Willow and Harmony. Makes a nice change of pace from the usual Xander only stories that we see so much online!

Yeah, that was the goal here. Xander's the catalyst and POV, but the real change is in others.

That is FANTASTIC! *HUGS*

Thanks.

Best YAHF oneshot (or start of series) I've read in a long while.
Ups, I'm still chuckling. Oh, the images...
Thanks.

It's a good one, isn't it? Stupid sister with her Harley/Ivy obsession...

Hell yeah, I almost wish you were continuing this one

I might.

[snerk]

Nice.

Thanks. :)

Brilliant! I think they all won, definitely. I'm dying to know what the bet was, but I doubt I'll ever know.

Nothing of consequence; in my head it was something as simple as highest score on a test or something along those lines. Just Xander and Cordelia being combative again, and Willow and Harmony getting caught in the crossfire.

Very nice, the summary was perfect for it but in the end I think everybody won, well except possibly Buffy.

Where is Buffy, anyways?

LOL! So very well done!

Thanks. :)

Cute. I'd encourage you to expand this... but honestly, the very idea of Willow/Harmony is more than a little disturbing on a number of levels.

Still, I wouldn't complain... unless it meant you were stopping something else... again :-)

Dude, what's wrong with Willow/Harmony? :)