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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Satori
Review:
What GRD said. Honorverse stories are in short supply here so keep it coming.

Love the idea of nimitz on the hellmouth.... vampires than get in his way are so much dust...
Comments from author:
Thanks! I've loved Nimitz since I first read about him :-)
Review By [Satori] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Snag
Review:
Nice choice, having Cordy be the one wearing the costume. She's definately got the moxy for it. Keep 'em comin'!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [(Past Donor)Snag] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from grd
Review:
There are not enough stories crossing over with the Honorverse. Please continue yours. I like the idea and concept. More Nimitz too. Thank you.
Comments from author:
Thank you! And don't worry, Nimitz is central to this story :-)
Review By [grd] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Very nice start! Interesting choice, to have Cordelia's immediate motives to be the preservation of Nimitz's life. Look forward to many good chapters to come.

Nitpick: Honor's choice of carry guns are automatics, not revolvers.

So happy that someone picked up the challenge.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I actually chose the revolver for a reason: Cordelia was in Honor's dress uniform (which is why she had the sword too) and the revolver was a gift that Honor only wears on special occasions.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon
Review:
A very new plot(at least to me)Nimitz on the Hellmouth.Poor Clem. :)
Comments from author:
Ooh, kitten poker hadn't crossed my mind yet...*evil chuckle* Thanks for the review!
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DrDamage
Review:
This has fascinating possibilities. Also I love it when a story gets out from under it's authors tyrannical thumb.

:)

I'm kind of hoping you're not planning to _completely_ rewrite the Cordelia character, though bonding with a treecat, as seems likely, is a plausible reason for character adjustments.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! I'm not planning to make Cordelia over entirely, but having a whole new perspective thrust on you has got to change a person; and having Nimitz as a moral compass can only help :-)
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from martelcris
Review:
Good work!
Update soon please !
PS:I was thinking to say something smart or make some useful suggestion, but reading the other reviews ...
So I limit myself to : Pleaseeee (puppy eyes included)
Comments from author:
No! Not the puppy eyes!!! Thanks for the review, and I'll work on the updates :-)
Review By [martelcris] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)boo
Review:
This is an amazing start. I absolutely love the honor harrington series. I would love to read a major story out of this. Like what does Cordelia really remember and how it would be useful. Also, since she is the one who will get visions, its stands to reason she should be some sort of "sensitive". You could go in at least three directions off the top of my head: 1. straight buffy (now cordy and xander both have a soldiers memories?) 2. cross with stargate (it being the most common cross with space involved) 3. somehow get the honorverse involved (Can you see cordy on grayson and the womens right deal). That would be interesting. or a completely different cross like NCIS (they have a big bad of the week and there's the military thing.) Just some random suggestions to hopefully get things going. Great job!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! I'm not quite sure where I'm heading with this so I appreciate the ideas :-)
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GandalfTG
Review:
Very cool, I like how it isn't just another "Xander chooses a different costume" story.

I'm glad to see Nimitz sticking around after the spell, but I wonder at what you're going to do with him.

I look forward to seeing where you take this!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm kinda wondering that myself ;-)
Review By [GandalfTG] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
I logged on to your story and expected to read a silly little story that might bring a smile to my face. Instead I read a really nice START to a very interesting AU. The relationship between Nimitz and Cordy is going to be the core to your story. I hope you continue this story as this beginning has so much potential, I really want to read what this AU is like with Nimitz as a Scooby and Cordy as a proven combat leader. Maybe Giles can come up with a spell to make most people see the treecat as just a Really Big Kittycat. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review! I'm planning to continue assuming my Mewses cooperate :-) But I'm still trying to figure out how to get away with Cordelia taking Nimitz to school...
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
Glad to see someone write this. I took a look at the challenge, and put it on the list of things that I'd like to do, but really had no idea how to go about it. You've got a good start here. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoeB
Review:
I was hoping someone would pick that challange up, You look like you might have a nice twist on it.

Looking foward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [JoeB] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
Review:
Great idea, though --there's another HH/Buffy crossover (B. gets sucked into Acathla, spit out on Haven & is a POW with HH at that planet....)---
Hm, Cordelia needs to get Nimitz to 'bond' with somebody, stat--hopefully her--- also does Cordelia retain any of HH's physical stuff? (heavy gravity adaptation, plus full hand to hand training?)-- C. is definitely very smart, she got top grades & was accepted to lots of colleges etc---
Maybe Willow can do a spell that helps xfer the bond Nimitz has to Cordelia.... beyond that it depends on how much knowledge C retains--can she eventually build high tech gadgets? Remember all the combat tactics etc learned at the academy? etc....... hm, if she gets some of HH's physical abilities, might benefit slightly from 'prolong'...
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review :-)
I don't think she'll be able to build much, the tech base is too different - plus Honor came up the Tac side, not the Engineering side - but as for combat tactics...oh yeah!
As for physical abilities? I've been trying to think logically (very difficult for me...) and I think that she will get to keep any genetic modifications, but nothing "added on" at a later time like her cybernetic eye.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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