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slightlyeccentricReview:
this looks very interesting, i hope that you update again soon.
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slightlyeccentric] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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ElleriaReview:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [21 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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KenshinReview:
Looking forward to more.
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Kenshin] • Date [15 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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dogbertcarrollReview:
Flashback I hate to see,
Especially when they repeat endlessly.
But a decent story you have typed,
at least from what I've read, alright?
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dogbertcarroll] • Date [14 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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BobbokyReview:
good
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Bobboky] • Date [13 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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ordiethReview:
Good job on this part. I look forward to seeing what else you have for us with this. Such intriguing questions about the back story. It would be a shame to just fill everything in and answer all the questions up front. Tease us. Make us beg.
Comments from author:
That is exactly what I had in mind! I've got the next few chapters already written, just going over them to make sure they work and don't give too much away about people's secrets and back stories, at least, not until I want everyone to know them.
I love when you guys say you have questions, makes me think I've achieved something in the story (Even if my writin sux!).
Keep up the reviews and I'll update soon... The writing monkey needs bananas!
Thanks,
Tubbs McGee
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ordieth] • Date [13 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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CPTSkipReview:
You have definitely got my attention and interest. I hope you write more as you did a nice job with Xander and I can't wait for him to meet River.
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CPTSkip] • Date [13 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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xanderfanReview:
It's a very interesting start. I can't wait to read more.
Hope you update soon.
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xanderfan] • Date [13 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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ThewanderReview:
I Like it. cant wait for more.
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Thewander] • Date [13 Mar 08] • Not Rated
