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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Jinxy
Review:
Aw poor both of them...Faith for being so frustrated with B, and Buffy for her hurt back and knowing she's hurting Faith. I can definitely understand why they'd both by hesitant/insecure. Wonderfully written...though yeah, not exactly suited for Kira lol
Review By [Jinxy] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Jinxy
Review:
Wow, Faith is so bad to be touching her like that with Xander right there...not that Buffy minded, lol. Still enjoying this, I'm tempted to read it all tonight...
Comments from author:
::Faith is so bad to be touching her like that with Xander right there...not that Buffy minded::

Faith is an expert at making bad things seem like a good idea.
^_^

Go ahead and read it all!
That's what it's there for!
Review By [Jinxy] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Jinxy
Review:
I love this so far; I'm so glad you did a sequel to the other two! I read them a while back and hoped there would be more :) I like that Buffy is letting Faith be around her somewhat if cuatiously, and I felt so bad for Faith when she said she hopes Buffy will kill her if she's just pretending...
Comments from author:
Both Faith and Buffy have trust issues, yep.
And Buffy has tricked Faith before, so she couldn't help thinking this was maybe leading up to another 'Psych!' moment.
Review By [Jinxy] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Past Donor)Lupo
Review:
Man, I was sooooo glad when I opened my email and saw you updated this story! I really liked the way Faith and Buffy interact on their date. I get the flashback to abuse that Faith suffered, but I'm not sure about the knifing her abuser part or the reason behind her not remembering attacking the clown. Could it be a false memory implanted by the Mayor? Just another sign that he's manipulating her? And I can't wait to see what tats they pick for each other. I've got a feeling Faith is going to be sporting something cutesy like a care bear,lol.

Please keep posting and I can't wait for more.

See ya...............
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [7 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from DavidFraser
Review:
Aaah ! Now this I really want to read more. (Please?)

Okay, it might not be much encouragement, but something to consider sometime?
Comments from author:
Dude.
Did you read this from the beginning?
(that is, from the series beginning? 'Cause that's a lot of reading!).

If you want more of this storyline, the novel 'Virtue of a Warrior' gives some backstory on Faith's adventures before settling down... wherever it is that she is while telling this story.
'Interludes' shows how she met Kira.

I will get back to this eventually, yes.
Review By [DavidFraser] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Jokool
Review:
Love this story. Buffy's thoughts get a little long winded at times, but that is better then having no insight to her at all. You have the characters down pat. Anyway just wanted to let you know I liked it so you will keep writing!
Review By [Jokool] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from SugarWater
Review:
Wow! Love, LOVE this story, and I can't wait for more! I especially enjoy how you describe all of Faith's various expressions and how you've got her dialogue down straight. Your writing is so descriptive and so true to the characters. The action is exciting, and the romance both sweet and HOT! Buffy is going to tease Faith to death, I'm sure of it. Just the same way your writing me is teasing me to death! It's a fun and exciting way to die, though, so don't stop.

A few of my favorite parts are when Faith tells Buffy that if she's just playing her, to just kill her without letting Faith ever know the truth. Uh! Talk about heart-wrenching. I also like how Buffy still has feelings for Angel, though they have changed (seems like it's the beginning of the end to me). Awesome battle scene with the Reapers--I mean Keepers (see now I'm doing it too ).

The scene with Buffy and Faith in the alley and on the roof top was fun, sweet, exciting, and so, so HOT--it was perfect. The part where Faith tells Buffy how people see her, how they are drawn to her, and can't help but love her--that was so beautiful. And of course I loved the symbolism in the discussion about the knight, and I was so happy that Buffy called Faith a knight--that she's finally not seeing her as a villain. I was laughing out loud when Faith kissed her w/o permission and responds that she's not a knight.

Anyway, I'm pretty sure I just covered the entire story with my favorite parts, it's just that I enjoyed every bit of it. Oh, i just thought of another one. I like how Buffy wants to stake the blonde vampire--I'd like to see Buffy get more jealous. I think she deserves a little discomfort to balance out all the emotional anguish Faith has gone though for her.

Thanks again for an awesome story and for sure one of the best pairings I've ever read. I can't wait for more in this series.
Comments from author:
Hey there.
Wow, you are a wonderful and generous reader/reviewer!

I'm glad you're enjoying this story; I kind of like this one too.
^_^

My brain has sort of been on vacation for the last six months or so, but hopefully I'll pull myself back together here soon, and get back to the writing.
Nice people like you make that seem more important (and more doable) than it would be otherwise.

Thank you.
Review By [SugarWater] • Date [12 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from audiodream
Review:
i love this fic i can't wait for more! :)
Review By [audiodream] • Date [3 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from (Past Donor)Lupo
Review:
Another great chapter. Is Faith going to go back and "acquire" the compact to give Buffy later. What would Buffy think if someone else attacked the vendor and robbed him? Would Faith have to start back at square one? If Buffy could forgive all Angel did as Angelus, she ought to be able to allow Faith to slide a little.

There are sooo many ways you can go with this story.
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [27 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from RavenMorbisk
Review:
Faith's so sweet ^^ and yeay, Buffy's very slowly getting over her fear thing..
And aww, just the way I like it, Faith buying her roses... I'm just a sap myself...
For a moment there I thought Faith was going to go back and really, really hurt that guy with the golden mirrorcompact-thingie...
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [27 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from RavenMorbisk
Review:
Faith's so adorably patient and Buffy's actually such a tease...
Great update, pretty fast, too. Love it ^^
Comments from author:
--Faith's so adorably patient and Buffy's actually such a tease...--

^_^
Hey, for THIS girl, Faith is willing to put up with a lot.
(Wouldn't you?)
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [26 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Looneyboyo
Review:
So far, so good. It feels a little tortuous as relationships go, but since that's clearly deliberate it just adds to the story. My oly complaint is the storywithin-a-story element: it's very well done, but it's kinda sad knowing that this is all Faith's fantasy, and the real Buffy hates her guts.
Review By [Looneyboyo] • Date [26 Mar 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Past Donor)Lupo
Review:
You should have Buffy just stake Angel already.
Also if Buffy is in the house listening to Faith tell this story to Kira, she would have to re-evaluate the way she thinks of Faith, since by this telling it would be obvious how Faith feels about her. Heroic, Brave, Dangerous, etc..

Keep on writing please
Comments from author:
--You should have Buffy just stake Angel already. --

Noooo!
They're super-eternal-soulmates till the end of tiiiiiiiiiiimmmmmeeeeee!!!
(Blech!)

Besides, I can't wait to see what happens when the poor fool finds out what's happening.
Heh heh heh.

--Also if Buffy is in the house listening to Faith tell this story to Kira, she would have to re-evaluate the way she thinks of Faith, since by this telling it would be obvious how Faith feels about her. Heroic, Brave, Dangerous, etc..--

Um.
I think you should bear in mind Buffy's reaction to Spike's BuffyBot.
In a way, it was a pretty profound bit of flattery (sort of), and yet, Buffy didn't seem too happy about being part of someone's sexual fantasy, even by proxy.
So....
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [25 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from RavenMorbisk
Review:
Tsk-tsk, making Faith do good things won't make her un-evil overnight, Buffy. *sighs and shakes head* blondes, right *rolls eyes* [ignoring the fact that I'm a blonde]
What's with the uber-healing? Something 'bad-waiting-to-happen' or just handy?
I'm sure Ms Etheridge will love it that you used her song ^^
Comments from author:
--Tsk-tsk, making Faith do good things won't make her un-evil overnight, Buffy.--

This is true.
And yet, it IS pretty nifty that she can make Faith DO those good deeds, isn't it?
Those blondes wield some pretty scary power over us poor, lovestruck fools.
^_^

--What's with the uber-healing? Something 'bad-waiting-to-happen' or just handy?--

Shhh!
It's a super-secret plot point. And you only have to wait for another two or three books to see some more developments there.
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [25 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Jezzibel
Review:
I really like the effect Faith is having on Buffy. The bit where Buffy is explain how she thinks people feel about her, is just wonderful. I can't wait to see what happens next.


(Sorry to be nit-picky, but the Melissa Ethridge song is called "Angels Would Fall")
Comments from author:
B needs someone to loosen her up a bit, yep. And I always wanted her to be a little more honest about her feelings and motivations than she ever was in the show.

--(Sorry to be nit-picky, but the Melissa Ethridge song is called "Angels Would Fall")--

Um, nope!
Sorry, but I'm a HUGE Melissa fan. I know 'Angels would fall', and this ain't it.
::Sings 'But if they knew, if they knew you at all, then one by one, Angels would falllllll....'::
It's off her sixth album:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Angels_Would_Fall
'Like the way I do' was one of her earliest songs; she was singing it in clubs before she even got her record deal. It's on her first album.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Like_the_way_I_do
Review By [Jezzibel] • Date [25 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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