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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from RavenMorbisk
Review:
That's so typical of Angel... I really like how you write him, it's exactly how I think of him *grin*
I think it's cute you wanna get Buffy and Faith go on dates.. because no one'll ever see those two at the movies together.. or at a restaurant, right? Riiight ^^
The Mayor knows about Faith's little love interest in the blonde Slayer, right? He doesn't like... wanna kill her?
Hey... I thought that they killed all the Keepers, too. What gives *pout*? Good thing Angel's going after it alone then... Poor Buffy, already hurt so bad.
And wtf? Magical Screwdriver? Did not see that one coming *grin*
Comments from author:
--I think it's cute you wanna get Buffy and Faith go on dates.. because no one'll ever see those two at the movies together.. or at a restaurant, right? Riiight ^^--

Um, wrong?
Actually, we see them go on a fairly normal sort of date in the chapter I just posted, and in the next 'book' they'll go see a movie, too. Dates aren't impossible for them, although problems will definitely follow.

--The Mayor knows about Faith's little love interest in the blonde Slayer, right? He doesn't like... wanna kill her?--

He knows, yeah. And he's not happy about the whole deal, but he also wants very much to keep Faith happy. Partly because she's his most powerful weapon, and partly because he really does care about her. We'll get more on his viewpoint eventually.

--And wtf? Magical Screwdriver? Did not see that one coming *grin*--

^_^
That's some elaborate and subtle writer stuff, where I'm basically saying that Angel is, well, a tool.
Heh.
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
This is some of the best writing I've read. You do hurt and comfort, or the lack of comfort, so incredibly well. This is a Faith I would like to see more of in the future.

I don't think I've read these chapters have you pulled this story out of cold storage?
Comments from author:
--This is some of the best writing I've read.--

You exaggerate, but thanks.

--You do hurt and comfort, or the lack of comfort, so incredibly well.--

Yeah, well....
I know how to write hurt, since I hurt a lot.
I know how to write comfort, since I wish for comfort a lot.
Lack of comfort; that one's a snap to do, really. Darn it.
And there you go.

--I don't think I've read these chapters have you pulled this story out of cold storage?--

Mm.
These have been around since the middle of last year, if you know where to look. I'm tryin' to get back on track with the writing in general right now, and then I'll hopefully finish at least this book, possibly the next one also, before the end of this year.

Thanks for the reviewage, and the Rec, also.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Past Donor)Lupo
Review:
Very hot roof top scene. At the end while talking to Kira, did Faith sense Buffy listening downstairs? Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Well, Buffy IS in the house somewhere, and I guess she's doing something.
Listening?
Maaaaaybe.
(wonder what she's making of this whole thing, if she is?)
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [23 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)Piperkat
Review:
Whoa...note to self, do NOT read this story while in class, no matter how tempting it may be. ;)
Very hot, but also sort of sweet. I've always had a soft spot for Faith, so it's nice to see her getting some...er, "positive attention." I like the fact that you're taking your time getting them into bed, as I don't think Buffy would be able to get over her hangups that fast. Though, on the other hand, I feel a bit like Faith--if you keep teasing us and then ending the chapter, I may have to kill you. :) Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Charting Buffy's emotional course changes, and trying to make it a believable development, is the biggest challenge in this story. It helps that all of this, including the Buffy reactions, are Faith's TAKE on what could have/should have happened. And she even admits that she's likely getting it wrong, and being wildly optimistic/wish-fulfillment girl, here.
That being said... it hopefully still rings true as we read it, 'cause otherwise nobody would WANT to read it.
o_O

Yikes, I think I just confused myself, there.
What's this story about again?
(^_^)
Review By [(Current Donor)Piperkat] • Date [23 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Quiet
Review:
Gah! This is wonderful!! You're doing excellent work here, keep going! Your writing is awesome, your stories are fantastic, and you're doing everything beautifully!!

I love the way this story is real, in that it's not real, if that makes any sense. It makes me sad, but life can be like that sometimes...and I can get easily distracted with the "super-happy" stuff. Cause super-happy tinged with realism is most definitely of the good ^_^

I love how well you're working the story; it doesn't feel rushed, or shallow...or like an idea that was good to begin with (as a basic frame) that doesn't become what it could be. "The-little-lump-of-clay-that-could-have-been-an-awesome-sculpture-if-it-had-been-developed-more" syndrome, I guess. But like I said, this isn't you. YOU are building this great, fantastic, awesome, freaking SUH-WEET, beautifully rendered story, masterfully crafting it and entrancing all of us mere mortals as we read.

And you're doing it in an extremely timely manner. Which is all kinds of exciting ^_^ Yay!

So please! By all means, continue!!!

(On a more focused note, for this particular chapter...you were right, that so kicked ass! I LOVED the part where Buffy and Faith fought together, that was way bad-ass ^_^ And how Buffy's already learning and growing from the reality check Faith hit her with the previous night. I can't wait for the next part!!)

Mad love
Review By [Quiet] • Date [23 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Past Donor)Lupo
Review:
Excellent fight sequence! It's good to see Buffy starting to think of someone else who might be hurting. I'm glad she remembered that if it wasn't for Faith, her goose would have been cooked. Even if she did remember it a little late.
Please keep writing......
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [22 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Past Donor)Lupo
Review:
I'm really enjoying the storytelling format of this story. Every time I'm pulled in and immersed in the story plot, you pull back to a sidebar with Kira reminding me that there is a bigger story in the background. I really enjoy this story and hope you continue to write and post it.
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [22 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from RavenMorbisk
Review:
One hell of a fight..
Good thing Buffy realized she just couldn't leave after Faith pretty much saved her ass. How is Faith? Hurt really bad? It looked like she was really hurt.. Poor Faith...
Kira is adorable.. I love that little chica.
Comments from author:
--Good thing Buffy realized she just couldn't leave after Faith pretty much saved her ass--

Buffy CAN see beyond her own selfish little world, sometimes... if you give her a while to work it out.
Faith just needs a little tlc and she'll be fine.
What really hurt her, about being hurt like that, was not being able to scream 'Fuck! ShitdamnFUCK that hurts!!!' at the top of her lungs, because the stupid scoobies would have heard her. Swallowing that was probably more painful than the actual injury.
^_^

I like Kira. And I know how it feels to have someone in the audience oh-so-innocently speak up, and point out where the storyteller has missed a certain obvious error, like a forgotten knife.
o_O
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [22 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RavenMorbisk
Review:
You can get enough encouragement from me *grin*
I loved the last scene with Xander almost catching Faith and Buffy.
So.. is Faith going to stay and fight those Keepers with or without the others noticing? Or is she really just going to leave the Scoobies to handle it themselves?
I'm waiting in anticipation for the next chappie ^^
Comments from author:
--I loved the last scene with Xander almost catching Faith and Buffy--

Poor Xander. If only his eyesight weren't merely human, he would have had some new material for his Buffy fantasies.
^_^

--So.. is Faith going to stay and fight those Keepers with or without the others noticing? Or is she really just going to leave the Scoobies to handle it themselves?--

Now you know. And of course it was never about the Scoobies; she couldn't care less about those guys. Buffy, on the other hand, needs someone to take care of her, obviously. And Faith is willing to volunteer for that little chore, without much in the way of complaint.
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [21 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)Lupo
Review:
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you.......... I've been waiting for more in your Faithverse. Please keep posting.
Comments from author:
You're welcome?

Posting is the easy part, though. Writing it... not so much.
o_O
Review By [(Past Donor)Lupo] • Date [21 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RavenMorbisk
Review:
I was wondering when you were going to continue this series.
Just like with the previous ones, I'm in love with this one, too.
Comments from author:
Hey, thanks!
I like this story/series like crazy, but it's sort of intimidating to work on. So any encouragement is not only welcome, it's sort of desperately needed.
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [20 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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