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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from BlameyFomorrii
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Poor Buffy. I really enjoyed this chapter and how everyone realizes that Buffy isn't quite all there.



I can't wait to see what happens next!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Tempe
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So is Buffy really a were? Are you going to involve the rest of the AB cast or are you going to focus on the shifters? Does she really have no memory of who or what she is? Anyway I'd love to see where you're going with this.
Review By [Tempe] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from soulfulone
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damn....another really good story by you!!!
this was awesome...and even though i have questions...i'm just gonna sit back and let the story unfold....because there are just so many different directions you could take this story in, that i can't even begin to predict where....and i've read all of the AB books!!

please update again soon....i have a total addiction to your stories!!! i need a fix soon!!!
Review By [soulfulone] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from DaniD
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Looks like Zane is going to jump on the chance to install Buffy as the Nimir-Ra..It almost works better for them that she doesn't know who she is, or has another life to go to. As long as she is able to protect them. These are desperate people..

Thanks for another great update :D
Review By [DaniD] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from gigi
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Dammit! I hate when you do that! Good chapter. Please update soon.
Review By [gigi] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AllenPitt
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I guess the next big question is, will she shift, or not.... in the slayerverse the slayer never does, she has 'essence of a demon' that gives her all her abilities. Here, she seems to be a shifter, of some cat species.... so is she like Anita just 'having the spirit' or can she shift? either way I can see many vamps would want her for a triumvirate, or at least if 'cat' is their animal to call would want her to control her etc... not sure that would work too well...heh....
They might be surprised by her reaction to meeting a vamp...... the memory loss is very weird, hopefully it's short term.
And hey--maybe by chapter 5, she'll get some clothes to wear! -- .... presumably very soon the master of the city will be informed of her presence, and demand that she come to pay respects. I'm sure that will go well....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Valkyrie
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I suppose the no name thing should be evident by the title. Still reading.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from BlameyFomorrii
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"“When did you get into town?” he asked. “I hadn't...I hadn't heard of any other leopards coming in. Did you hear about Gabriel and Raina?”

Nothing was making sense.

“I'm,” she said, another sentence she couldn't finish. “I'm. I'm.”

They were staring at her. Nathaniel's eyes were wide.

She put her arm on the table and then laid her head on it."

----Poor Buffy. I really think that basement was a really bad black magic spell (obviously, what white spell needs a dismembered corpse?) to bring someone back from the dead. She's so traumatized. Did the spell erase her memory of her past, to? Or is it the shock of it all that's left her like this. She hasn't finished a single sentence yet, has she? I think the boys are starting to realize this.


Boo. Now I'm hooked to another one of your stories. I hope you update this and Ebb soon, please!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from BlameyFomorrii
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Poor Nathaniel, poor white haired man (I don't know his name). I hope Buffy lets them follow her. But I can see how she would feel so overwhelmed; it seems she doesn't remember her time as the Slayer, but she has a physical memory of always being 'needed' for protection, leadership, and just in general and now she's plopped in a strange place and being begged by two strangers for protection. Overwhelming.


I liked this chapter and I think I like this story. I would still really like another update on Ebb, though. That story is so good!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlameyFomorrii
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Was the silver cicles stars and bloody sacrifice a ritual to bring Buffy over to this place? Is that why she's naked and disorientated? Was it a spell to bring her-or something and it snatched at Buffy instead-back to life?


Hmmm. Yes, there is a bit of hate being felt for starting a new story, but there's also piqued interest and happiness to see you doing Anita Blake rather than another Troy one. (I haven't seen Troy, and would have no interest to except I want to know what's going on with that story line enough to read your stories...)
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from feekh
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So so cool. I just love your descriptions, how lost she is. You bring across the amnesia extremely well without harping on about it.
Review By [feekh] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Chaos
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Gah! Another new story! Don't get me wrong, I love all your stories and this one sounds very promising, but are you going to be able to finish them all?

In any case, great story. I never actually read the AB books, but I've read plenty of fanfic on it, so I take that Anita didn't assume the Nimir-Ra position until a bit of time had pased after Gabriel and Raina were killed? Buffy as Nimir-Ra ... definitely an interesting idea. It just lends itself towards all sorts of confrontations. Jean-Claude, Anita, Richard, Asher...
Review By [Chaos] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from WinterRayne
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Great start!!
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [23 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AllenPitt
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it's interesting that they think she's a leopard. Then again, when B. met her 'spirit guide' it appeared as a great cat...and there are lots of little hints in that direction --Restless, "Miss Kitty Fantastico" stuff like that--so it actually makes sense....
Of course she's never shifted...but maybe she's like Anita in that respect...has the spirit but doesn't actually shift. Just all the advantages--strength, healing etc. Hm, no aversion to silver has ever been shown. I wonder what a blood test would reveal? ie in Anita's world, they can check for that sort of thing....
RPIT should get involved once they find the body..... and even in St. Louis the desk clerk might remember her being all covered in drive blood and stuff........
Is this before or after Nathaniel has met Anita?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DaniD
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I'm assuming it's Buffy because the story is listed under Buffy centric...I'm thinking a spell caused her to cross dimensions?? or just locations? Either way, she is completely befuddled. I can't help but wonder why Zane and Nathaniel think that she is a Were-Leopard?

Can't wait to see this unfold..it's really fantastic!
Review By [DaniD] • Date [23 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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