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Review of chapter "A slow dying flower." from Sabryna
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I really love this story. It's really original and interesting. The way you described Faith's past with the Sheperds is really good. But the updates are really too long. I had completely forgotten that I was reading this and needed some time to remember what was said in the firsts chapter. It's bothering, because it's the begin so you have to catch the readers interest but the updates have to be more frequent.
Hope to read you a little sooner next time.
Review By [Sabryna] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A slow dying flower." from smee
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Being un-betad it wasn't as bad as you think it was. I'm so glad that Joyce called and reunited the family. I can't wait to see how the G.A. crew deals with a slayer around.
Review By [smee] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A slow dying flower." from AllenPitt
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Yep, the council will be after her the instant she wakes up; she'll want revenge on Buffy... all that. Not sure why the police arrested 'her' in the series, they had nowhere near enough evidence to pin anything on her. If anything she'd be a huge embarrassment to the city (the mayor had paid for the nice apartment she was living in, for example. Heh) --
* Might be fun if the adoptive 'rents get a hold of the tape the Mayor left for her. They'd have a lot of questions based on that; and legally it'd be solid grounds for blaming everything on him... (old guy taking advantage of a teen etc)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A slow dying flower." from Darklight
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Like it, keep the scoobs out of it, as for the switch, get Faith to switch with someone who both her parents talk to about their daughter

Looking forward to see how Faith is going to react to her Mom and Dad when she wakes up.

Keep the chapters coming.
Review By [Darklight] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming Untouchable" from WhenNightFalls
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It looks like it's been almost a month since you've updated this. I'm really interested to see how this goes.
Review By [WhenNightFalls] • Date [31 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming Untouchable" from Scrappychic
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I enjoyed this so far. Looking forward to more.
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [23 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming Untouchable" from littleoldme
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I'm still enjoying this story. And in answer to your question, I'm pretty sure I'd be a spatula- useful, but also just a little bit odd.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [21 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming Untouchable" from jennzabelle
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That was excellent! I really thought you did well keeping the voices of the characters distinct. I also found it poignant that you had Mark loving Faith as well as Derek and Addison loving and missing her. Izzie's interlude was insightful and for Meredith's I wondered if Faith was part of the all female family group or if her addition to the picture would mean that Derek would keep it locked away. I don't watch Grey's Anatomy, but I really enjoyed this. I look forward to the next installment (soon?).
One correction - in the last sentence of Mark's POV, you don't need the "of" after "had" - the sound is actually the " 've " of have like should've, not should of. Anyway, your sentence just doesn't need it. (Sorry, it's a pet peeve of mine.)
Oh, and I'd be a whisk, given the choice - beautiful, delicate, strong and capable of whipping almost any sauce to a froth of airy excitement. Especially good on meringues.
The kitchen implement I *am*? More like a dough hook - generally not useful until needed, but then you're damn glad you have it, capable of churning disparate, heavy ingredients into a smooth, silky mixture that needs more work to be edible.
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you liked the last chapter i had up, hope you like this new one. In regards to your question i am planning on including Faith in the family photo. Thanks for your help with the grammar, i have tried not to make the same mistake this time around.
I'm intrigued by your life as a dough hook..... hope thats working out for you. Thanks for the review.
Review By [jennzabelle] • Date [9 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming Untouchable" from Kristal
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My lovely friend, you are amazing! I am thoroughly enjoying this story and can't wait to read more. I love the bits about the many different characters of Grey's- Izzy and Richard included- very good!

And rotf about the kitchen utensil... so gotta say that I am *so* a spork! Smooth but pointy, can be used for multiples of things, and for people who are too lazy to switch from a spoon to a fork! Perfect!

Continue ASAP. WRITE NOW!
Review By [Kristal] • Date [7 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming Untouchable" from babyshark
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This is a great story, best (in my opinion) of the Grey's Anatomy storys....
Please update again soon!....
If I could be a kitchen utensil I would be a butter knife,
harmless on the suface but if you mess with me the wrong way,
i can draw blood.... lol..
great story :)
Review By [babyshark] • Date [6 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming Untouchable" from Dema
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I'd be a rice cooker!

Okay I REALLLYYY love this fic premus so PLEEEEEEAAASSSSEEEEEEEEE can you update soon? PLEASE!!!! with Mark in a towle on top!
Review By [Dema] • Date [6 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming Untouchable" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
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Wonderful!!!

I'm really excited to see what comes next...You have a wonderful incite to some layers of Greys that the show hasn't been using...but I always thought were there...

if I were a kitchen utensil... a Whisk perhaps... I like things to combine, and mix, and create something new where there were two separate things... oh and fluffing stuff up...
Comments from author:
Really? Thankyou for the wonderful compliment Master Kent. I really appreciate you taking the time to review.
I think a lot of people relate to the whisk, but that's the first time I've heard the "fluffing things up" reasoning. :)
I hope to get a new chapter up soon, if work doesn't kill me first.
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [5 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming Untouchable" from AllenPitt
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hm, likely if they get a phone call about Faith now it's either "we've found her, she's in a coma" or "we've found her, she's in jail...." though I still think she could have beaten the rap if she'd had a good lawyer and not done the whole "confessed to everything" thing. There was no evidence for any of the things she'd done in Sunnydale (in fact the whole 'arrested' thing there while B. was in F's body was a bit strange, as they at most wanted to question her and had zero evidence) ... in LA, assault, sure, but that creep at the bus station was a clear predator, any lawyer could make that self defense.....
Still--wow, she'll seem very different to them. Is she still a minor? If called at 15 might still be only 16 or 17....
Utensil? I wouldn't make a good utensil. Too big, wouldn't fit in the drawer.
Comments from author:
I promise they are not getting a call to say she is in jail. The fanart that I have based this story off is called "please save her" by kristal. I hope the direction I take this in the next chapter pleases you. It is my understanding that while faith is still young, she appears less so due to her rough edges and as a result of having to grow up too fast. Her specific age and the timeline of her history as that I've gone with will become more apparent over the next few chapters.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming Untouchable" from Sabryna
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I am really looking forward the next part. I find the chapter too short... or maybe the delay between the update too long. I hope to read the next part soon. This story is really interesting.
Review By [Sabryna] • Date [5 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming Untouchable" from zigpal
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I just found this story and like twist of Faith's parentage. I can't wait to see how it develops. And I would be a spoon because the spoon is used more often than any other untensil.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [5 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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