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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
so very very awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from JaredDrake
Review:
Eh....interesting story. But couldn't you have picked a different marvel character? Naruto as Cain Marko doesn't really appeal to me. I hated the Juggernaut. I always imagined a grown Naruto to have a build like Remy LeBeau a.k.a. Gambit. The Juggernaut is a freak...
Review By [JaredDrake] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Hecatonchires
Review:
I'm assuming absorbing the gem has had some major psychological impact, because otherwise Naruto is _really_ OOC
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Elleria
Review:
Fairly interesting so far. Looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from misterq
Review:
The unstoppable Narugernaut... Very interesting premise. The blending of Naruto and Cain seems to care far less about others than Naruto. He could have just as easily knocked the low level ninjas out as killed them, but he didn't - and showed no remorse. Otherwise, it will be interesting to see where this plot bunny goes.
Review By [misterq] • Date [31 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Yojo
Review:
This has promise, but be careful how you blend Cain's and Naruto's characters together. I worry about you utterly destroying Naruto's empathy that he seems to share with everyone, as it is one of his key characteristics. Just watch how apathetic you make him to life/his friends, or devote a scene with him pondering his changes, or something along those lines: right now it is too sudden a shift. Good work on an original idea.
Review By [Yojo] • Date [31 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from plume
Review:
I guess the gem messed with Naruto's head because he'd never kill indiscriminately like that?
Review By [plume] • Date [31 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from XanderHalcyon
Review:
Your my favorite fanfic author. I like this story so far. I love naruto stories and I can't wait for more of this one.
Review By [XanderHalcyon] • Date [31 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Dragonelf
Review:
I am looking forward to read any new chapters you might get inspired to write.

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [31 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [31 Mar 08] • Not Rated
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