Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from
DragonelfReview:
I am looking forward to read any new chapters you might get inspired to write.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
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Dragonelf] • Date [7 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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martelcrisReview:
ROFL !!!!
I'm trying to visualize a Xander/Jack mix while laughing like a hyena (to remain in theme) and write this in the same time, is quite difficult as you can imagine.....
The worst problem is breath, laughing and breathing is ...problematic but I can overcome.
I was thinking about Jack and lots of gorgeous slayers in a close environment and I'm pretty sure that the SWC dentist need to hire help soon.
If the number of slaps Jack receive in the movies mean something there will be a slapping galore soon, Slayer slapping galore (slayer is the keyword): very painful and very damaging, do you know if the council pay health insurance to Xander ?
Recovering a eventual glass eye will become a full time work for someone (B. can hire Clem to care about the eye).
Fun....lot of Fun...
Bye
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martelcris] • Date [6 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
lucidityReview:
Love it! You totally have my attention!
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lucidity] • Date [6 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
DragonelfReview:
This story is looking good so far and I am looking forward to read any future chapters you might inspired to write. We will see any aftereffects of Xander being possesed by his ancestor?
By the way, I also enjoyed reading "Marvel vs. Aliens" and "X-Men: Trek Wars".
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Dragonelf] • Date [6 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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slightlyeccentricReview:
This was awesome. I can't wait to see how this is resolved, and how this possession affects Xander later.
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slightlyeccentric] • Date [6 Apr 08] • Not Rated
