Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
SFBKludgeReview:
OK I can see X giving MM his sense of humor.
The Overlay remark is... well lets say it was a juvenile pun that I wish I had made.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm quite proud of my lack of maturity too!
Feel free to use it if you get a chance.
Review By [
SFBKludge] • Date [12 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
IshikawaReview:
NICE!!!! Really like what you started there. You got rid of some of his more "strange" traits in a pretty unique way, after all a Willow messing with his mind is nothing new, but two vamps "playing" with him, interesting mental images there. I'll look forward to more on this one. Poor Bats he gonna be driven crazy by our X-Man.
Comments from author:
Yeah, it did straighten him out a bit and twisted Martian Manhunter quite a bit!
Willow is probably going to go through quite a few changes as well.
Heheh, I even have some changes planned for Faith and Wesley!
Review By [
Ishikawa] • Date [12 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
