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Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
"So Mr Rabbit," he said stroking a furry white caterpillar, "you thought you could make a collection of unfinished stories eh?"

Well, I for one knew you wouldn't do that...no not good ol' jrabbit, not him.

What I'm trying to say is 'YIPPEEEEEEE! Its back!' and I have to say worth the wait. The first paragraph was worth the, rather long, wait all by itself.

Now do you think you could get out another chapter before I die, I'll be 53 next year and I'm getting a bit worried that some of the stories I'm tracking will finish some time after my death!

So keep up the good work and keep writing.

Dave.
Comments from author:
You think you have until next year? You see, what I've yet to tell you is that I've surreptitiously substituted Ian, your beloved white caterpillar, with a robot caterpillar whose fur excretes a toxin when stroked. The toxin causes the stroker to begin experiencing hallucinations of giant greenfly attacks and instils an overwhelming feeling of paranoia and the delusion that all cans deodorant are out to get him...
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [10 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Hilarious! Glad to see that this one hasn't been abandoned.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [10 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Inquisitor
Review:
glad to see this story is still alive...as for how SackBladder can still be alive while not killing anyone, u can thank Baldrick for his rat's blood stew....guess Angel can be comforted to know that there's someone else that was low enough to eat rats like him when he was at his worst before Whistler told him to go to California...

i think this BlackAdder is probably the black adder from the Elizabethan era in which he along with the Royal court was killed by Prince Ludwig the indestructable...for all we know, Ludwig became a vampire after he escaped when BlackAdder came back for the Queen's costume party...also i think Lord Flashheart probably got bitten by a werewolf when a woman he was having sex with turned into a werewolf...

anyway Buffy is better off letting BlackAdder think that he's winning because he usually ends up causing more trouble for the enemy....
Review By [Inquisitor] • Date [9 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Nosi
Review:
So pleased to see an update to this. I loved your statement of Willow's - "all the sensitivity of a ...man". That's going to be remembered. And kudos too to Kiwikatipo - there's a word a haven't heard in a few years :)
Review By [Nosi] • Date [9 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from (Past Donor)JamieT
Review:
Excellent.

Glad to see this is back again.

I have a feeling too they won't get the pop culture reference again :)
Review By [(Past Donor)JamieT] • Date [9 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
Yeah! You've updated. Loved Giles' closing line. And Buffy & Kendra's outfits.

Eagerly anticipating the next chapter.

(^_^)/
BEM
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [9 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from (Past Donor)JamieT
Review:
Ok, that's a scarily accurate depiction of Andrew and co.

No turnip walking though, sad
Review By [(Past Donor)JamieT] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
"So, do all high school libraries come with a sensationally hot chick in a tight sweater who’s absolutely gagging for it? If someone had told me, I might have checked one out earlier.”

every scene with Lord Flashheart interacting with the denizens of Sunnydale is extremely enjoyable.
Comments from author:
"interacting" - is that what they call it these days?
Review By [(Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Past Donor)JamieT
Review:
Brilliant, positively brilliant.

A man taking a turnip for a walk, hahahahaha.

Poor Spike
Comments from author:
Man may be pushing it a bit in Baldrick's case, even before he was turned.
Review By [(Past Donor)JamieT] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Nosi
Review:
Once again I laughed all the way through Flash's appalling lines. Very well done.
Comments from author:
By 'appalling', I'm assuming you mean witty, charming, effervescent,sensitive,intelligent... no, perhaps not.
Review By [Nosi] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Why do I always seem to read this while I'm eating breakfast? I keep telling myself, 'No! Don't do it!' But...

This time it was the rabbit/Anya comment that nearly did for me... Better luck next time.

Great update looking forward to part 15.

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Murder by fanfiction? Now there's a plot bunny and a half!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from raisins
Review:
My mouth is stuck in a grin. :)
Review By [raisins] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from littlenut
Review:
I continue to love the hell out of this story.
Review By [littlenut] • Date [26 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Ddraig
Review:
Brilliant!

Even my non-fanfiction reading husband loved this one (he didn't believe someone could cross Buffy and Blackadder... silly man)
Review By [Ddraig] • Date [22 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from angelus
Review:
Lol maybe it could be a vampire turnip :)
Review By [angelus] • Date [21 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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