Starting very, very nice, and very amusing. I would just point out the lack of a 'are they giving these off at some event I'm not aware of' joke you could use about Nick and Xander's eyepatches. :) (hehe, I know it's a bit gross, but Tony Stark in this incarnation is not much for subtle)
Review By [BigHead] • Date [7 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Loads of fun to read. Really appreciate the effort and hope that you do add on. Characters seem close if not right on. Story works and flows well so far. Haven't yet see the film yet, but the portrail of Pepper and Tony from the trailers I have seen seem to translate well here. Can't wait for Faith and Tony to have a battle of lewd comments and suggestions. Only thing I would suggest or recommend is that if you are following the general setup of Season 8 comic as it appears you are, please leave out any Buffy/Satsumi relationship mentions. Will unlikely have any revelence and only overload a nice and light read. Keep it up and I know plenty will be reading. Thanks again.
Review By [missinglink] • Date [7 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Just saw the movie maybe an hour before reading this . . . and, in fact, am kicking myself for not staying for the end of the credits. I KNEW better, then second guessed myself and got out of there.
Anyway, great start to a fic. Can't wait to read more of this.
You got Tonys alcoholic leanings down. (Wonder if they will be in next movie.) Please use the " I hate magic" line that gets repeated by Tony quite often.
Review By [SFBKludge] • Date [7 May 08] • Not Rated
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