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Review of chapter "Bat Signal" from Hawkehunt
Review:
Aww... that's sweet...
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Hawkehunt] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bat Signal" from mousemt
Review:
Tee Hee! These are great! Thanks for posting.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [mousemt] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bat Signal" from MarbleGlove
Review:
Awesome!
Comments from author:
*beams* Thanks!
Review By [MarbleGlove] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bat Signal" from Chaoskitten
Review:
*snuffles*

aww that is just too sweet.

*sniffles*
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reason" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Awww...!

Just checking, though -- so far, only Dawn knows that Jack has the memories of a 50-something Air Force general (not Kit and Carlos)? Or do all three 'kids' know that Jack's not ENTIRELY the teenager he seems to be? (If Carlos and Kit don't know, I can just imagine the reasons they envision for Jack's choice not to date other teenagers of either sex.)
Comments from author:
At the current moment in Fragile Existence, only Dawn knows the full truth. Kit and Carlos, however, do know that Jack isn't 'real' so to speak. I'll probably touch on this more in Fragile Existence.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [15 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reason" from link
Review:
I like the real reason Carlos cancelled the date. That's so much manly. LOL. I like how you managed to show the uncomfortable feeling Jack and Carlos feels for the chick flick moments. Good chapter.
Comments from author:
:D Manliness is very important to both Jack and Carlos. Thank you.
Review By [link] • Date [15 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reason" from banner
Review:
* chuckle *
Good job - that was fun.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [banner] • Date [14 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reason" from LisaZ
Review:
Another great one Laney! Keep up the great work & good luck with all the finals! Fingers *&* toes crossed for ya! *G* (I'd do the eyes...but I gotta work! *VBG*)

Lisa
Comments from author:
Thanks, Lisa! Although, all this posting has taken my mind off Uni for the moment which is a good thing (I'm a bit of a stress head!) . Next chapter is tomorrow night.
Review By [LisaZ] • Date [14 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Safe House" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Awwww...! That's so . . . Jack (and how cool is it that Carlos takes the edge off the potentially emotional moment by trying to weasel car keys, too -- doing the "hey, I'm still a high school boy!" thing). Love Dawn's response, also.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Glad you liked Carlos. I enjoyed fleshing the character out through all the chapters.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Safe House" from link
Review:
I like how you make Jack completely uncomfortable when dealing with emotion especially women's emotion. That's very in-character. There's going to be more?
Comments from author:
Aaah, yes, Jack will never be completely comfortable with emotions, especially Dawn and Kit's.

Yep, there'll be more. The next will be up tonight or tomorrow, depending on how much study I get done.
Review By [link] • Date [13 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Safe House" from LisaZ
Review:
*giggle* This was brilliant Laney! I hope all is going well on the school front!

Lisa
Comments from author:
Thank you! Yep, all is going well on Uni. No bad marks yet *crosses fingers*
Review By [LisaZ] • Date [13 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Safe House" from Scrappychic
Review:
I love it. mini-Jack looking after his "kids". I'll be eagerly watching for the other 4.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm planning on posting the next fic either in a few hours or tomorrow afternoon.
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [13 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Safe House" from Sorla
Review:
Sweet! As a small companion piece it's perfect but I think it works well on it's own too. Well-written fluff makes me happy!
Comments from author:
Thank you! All five of the ficlets in the SAP Chronicles are really stand alone. I just like writing sap sometimes :D
Review By [Sorla] • Date [13 May 08] • Not Rated
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