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Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
Cool. First crossover with Rome I've seen done in a while and you did it justice! Nice job as usual!

Tracey
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [17 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from Gloriana
Review:
Finally someone has written a Rome fic. I'm looking forward to the rest of this very much.
Comments from author:
Thanks a lot, may do at least one more 'Rome' xover in the future.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [Gloriana] • Date [17 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from Dragonpink
Review:
“Women’s problems,” he replied knowingly......... no matter what time period men never really change...lmao =^.^=
Comments from author:
I know but it just seemed to fit with the character!

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [Dragonpink] • Date [17 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from JoeDineen
Review:
Well done, am enjoying this but for a chapter and a half I was expecting that the standard was stolen by Astrix and Obelisk.
Comments from author:
Yes! Asterix the Gaul! How could I forget? Well I managed somehow...maybe next time.

Thanks for the review,
DaveT.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
Faith should be careful with those Gauls - rumour has it they have a powerful dark sorcerer working with them, goes by the name of Getafix...
Comments from author:
Oh very funny! I could say, 'How gauling!' but I won't.

Thanks for the review.
DaveT.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from (Past Donor)ajayne
Review:
Love it, you were able to incorporate Faith into the action as though she was always there. Cant wait to see how this plays out (beyond the obvious story line as it was presented by HBO.
Kudos.
Comments from author:
Well, I hope you the rest of the fic lives up to everyones expectations.

Thanks for the review,
DaveT.
Review By [(Past Donor)ajayne] • Date [16 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from (Current Donor)Hotpoint
Review:
Salve Citizen, you are well met.

Nice story, looking forward to more. Does Wolfram and Hart have an office in Ancient Rome? I can imagine a few of their staff being rivals with Cicero for the reputation of the most devious legal minds in the Republic!

Incidentally you know Faith could make a *great* deal of money working as a Gladiatrix in the Arena.

Mars and Bellona keep you brother.
Comments from author:
More out today (with luck), glad you're enjoying.

Thanks for your review.

Vade in pace.
DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)Hotpoint] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from AllenPitt
Review:
She & Pullo should get along just fine. Much better for him than that other girl he ended up with. If this is the past, not another reality, then the council & a slayer exist...there's a chance they'll detect her if the current slayer dies and they do the regular "where's the slayer?" spell (what the hell did they do in those days if the next slayer was in South America or China or something? )---
Faith should fit right in (ironic that her ancestors were probably those Gauls, heh)---with no guns, she can really go to town in fighting...though it'll be tough to raise her social position much... still, women had higher status among the Romans than among the "lock 'em up in a room" Greeks....
* Ok, a spell to get her to the past, AND a translation spell....not to mention the whole healed thing. Major intervention... I wonder who or what did it.....
Comments from author:
If one BtVS character was to thrive in ancient Rome it would be Faith.

Slayer? I think she's be in China.

Council? I don't think it would exist AS WE KNOW IT just yet, but there would be people 'in the know' around the world to do the same job.

Who's responsible? Wait and see.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
I loved "Rome", and this is a great idea for a crossover. You've really got Pullo and Vorenus down, and it cracked me up when Pullo says "women's problems". Since you've apparently done a bit of research into both the historical events and the show, I assume that you know that Pullo and Vorenus really did exist, and were mentioned by Caesar in "Gaulic Wars".

Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the 'rec' and the review.

I'm lucky in having a friend who who knows a bit about the Roman Republic and i knew something of the military side of things.

Yes Pullo and Vorenus did indeed exist i hope I do them justice.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [16 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from ShyBob
Review:
Best. Summary. Ever.
And the story is good, too. Your fight scenes, in particular, are excellently written without any comic-book nonsense. Looking forward to more!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.

More out next week glad you're enjoying it.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
Review:
Love the story so far, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
More early next week.

Thanks for the review.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [16 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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