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Xander Harris: The Iron Tau'ri

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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Awesome stuff keep it up.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [20 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from saa
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Nice story. I am enjoying reading it. Please keep writing.

Thanks
Review By [saa] • Date [20 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Jarvey
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Awesome, I'm really enjoying it.
Review By [Jarvey] • Date [20 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
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This was fun. And only a few days or weeks after Halloween in sophmore year of high school? He needs more time to work out and get muscle memory going for what he knows in his head... despite the body improvements. Thanks for sharing such a complex set up. I'm enjoying it.
Comments from author:
You can thank the possession variant of Tony Stark known as "The Iron Sorcerer Supreme" for that little piece of luck. :) glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from mikerich
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WOW. If all the Tony Starks in his head started playing poker that could get a little rowdy.LOL.
Review By [mikerich] • Date [20 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from misterq
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I'm really liking where this story is headed to. Stark(s)!Xander will be a great addition to Stargate - if he doesn't kill Rodney McCay, that is. But if he uses the liquid naquadah that powers the zats as an energy source for his powered armor - well... that would be interesting. Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
hehe thanks.... and as sick as it sounds, i think McCay might even worship him once Xander's done humiliating him.

Gah, now I'VE got to take a cold shower..... brrr.
Review By [misterq] • Date [20 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from mikerich
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GREAT.If i remember correctly that one of the Tony Starks was a composer and pianist who also liked jazz and played the sax.that should give Xander some stability. the plasma pistol that stark enterprises security uses is a magneto hydrodynamic weapon that compresses the air to high temperature then shoots a plasma charge ,it should dust vamps nicely except it could get knocked out of your hand in a fight so it should be made in a arm bracer instead of a pistol. Is Xander going to change his last name to STARK:-D .
Review By [mikerich] • Date [20 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Greywizard
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A very interesting beginning here, and I'm eager to see more of it.

Definitely like the way you're limiting the available technology to avoid having him become too uber-powerful, and it should be fun to see Carter drooling over the hints of the tech Xander's capable of producing, once the SGC does become aware of him.

I can also see Jack trying to be droll once he sees the results of the repulsor pistol Xander's built, while trying to figure out a way to borrow it and then walk through the Stargate saying, "Hey, Anubis! Got something here I'd love to show you!"

And once the Scoobies become aware of his new talents, I can also see Buffy asking Xander if he could build her a light-sabre. ;-)

Anyway, good job.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [20 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from KingOfCretins
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Presumably Xander while perhaps possessing the knowledge of a Sorcerer Supreme he does not possess the power of a Sorcerer Supreme at least not without taking time (years or even a decade or more) to build up his magical potential.

I can only hope that he does not possess too much magic, its understandable that he would possess greater magical ability than before Halloween but it would be best if he had enough that combined with his Sorcerer Supreme knowledge he can do some magic but not any kind of serious combat magic or anything.
More than that would turn into – Sorcerer Supreme Magic’s + Iron Man Armour + immense knowledge of magic and technology = nearly unbeatable Xander and that would be boring unless he somehow had opponents with enough power to challenge such a mastery of magic and technology.

Besides Iron Man is mainly about the armour and technology so magic should take a backseat role in Xander's abilities.

Lots of potential please write more and keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
you presume correct, he has only the knowledge but not enough firepower.. with training he may be able to do the occasional spell (barely) but the only thing that other thing that the Iron Sorcerer Supreme left him is an immunity to certain magicka -- elemental magick being one of them.
Review By [KingOfCretins] • Date [20 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Darklight
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Great start, like it. can't wat to see how SG is going to try to strong arm Xander into working for them or give up his tech. Looking forward to see how big a business he's going to make himself and who will be his PA.
When xander finds out about the Ghould and starts to make his own plan to fight them

Get more out soon.
Review By [Darklight] • Date [20 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Strangyr
Review:
I really like this start........I hope you continue it.
Review By [Strangyr] • Date [20 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from wargear
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Please do continue.
Review By [wargear] • Date [20 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from speakerforthesilent
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Sweet, I can see all sorts o interesting places that this one might go. Just a word of warning, Beware the Gary-Sue. Xander could get really OP really quickly.
Review By [speakerforthesilent] • Date [20 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from MarcusFenix
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Wow...so far, this is a pretty good read. I like how you managed to bring all the different What If? and other versions of Tony all together, along with some nods to the Movie. Is his evolution related to Ultimates Tony? 'Cause if that's true, isn't he gonna die soon, because of all that, or did the Sorcerer Supreme solve that issue?
Review By [MarcusFenix] • Date [20 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from VillageOrchid
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Very interesting. I'd like you to clarify how Xander's knowledge of the tv series might effect his daily and monthly decisions. He obviously doesn't wish to manipulate anyone's personality like in some uber-Xander tales, only survive better (a combined Xander and Tony Stark trait).

Besides if he's better mentally and physically, waiting on the whole flying armor thing until he graduates from high school is probably a good thing.

Also would you clarify if SGC is real in his reality and do any of his previous Tony Stark's remember a television version.

Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 May 08] • Not Rated
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