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Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Ice, morphing, ray guns and seeing" from rothos
Review:
Great story, some errors; such as using bare instead of bear but overall not affecting this story to any appreciable extent.
Comments from author:
thank you!! I've changed the mistake :) thanks again.
Review By [rothos] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Ice, morphing, ray guns and seeing" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
:)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Ice, morphing, ray guns and seeing" from arkeus
Review:
eh.

Nice, though i dislike the overly used Halloween Answer-All, this is well written so far :D
Comments from author:
thank you! I'll try not to disappoint. :)
Review By [arkeus] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Ice, morphing, ray guns and seeing" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Great stuff.
Comments from author:
thank you :)
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hellmouth opening" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting story, please add more soon. This is in the multipile crossovers section, when will we see the other crossovers?
Will Xander be able to use jutsus?
Comments from author:
I'll update soon, cause I need to check through the next chapter for any mistakes.

Yup this will be a multiple crossovers, the bulk of it is Buffy and Stargate. Characters from Andromeda, Star Wars and One Piece will join the group in later chapters.

I'm building up the story in the first few chapters, so currently there will only be hints of them. :)

Yes Xander will be able to use jutsus, but his speciality is in Seals.

Thanks for the review ^^ !
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hellmouth opening" from LFW
Review:
Nice
Dawn is there and the reaction law is in effect with a bigger bad on the way
Oh, and a good place for the One Who Sees
Good fit
Xander better break into the shop before the costumes wander off though
Comments from author:
haha thanks!

yup! the reaction law is in effect and Xander is going to be paying a huge price for his power, Glory being the least of his problems ;)
Review By [LFW] • Date [31 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hellmouth opening" from Almadynis
Review:
Very intriguing, please continue.
Comments from author:
thank you!! ^^
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [31 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hellmouth opening" from arkeus
Review:
ahah.

Things are coming to an head :D
Comments from author:
yup! and next up, xander will retrieve some costume items turned real =D
Review By [arkeus] • Date [31 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hellmouth opening" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Great job.
Comments from author:
thank you! :)
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [31 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hellmouth opening" from Ahdamnit
Review:
You spell it or Kyuubi, not Kyubbi. There is only one b in it.
Comments from author:
Hi! Thanks for spotting it. I checked the wikipedia and they spell it Kyubi so I'll use that :) ^^
Review By [Ahdamnit] • Date [31 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hellmouth opening" from LordCorwin
Review:
Alright .. I like how you're tying in the "One who Sees" into the chakra's .. :)
Comments from author:
haha thanks! :)
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [30 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Hellmouth opening" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
:)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Konoha Halloween" from Robby
Review:
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope you up date soon!
Comments from author:
I'll thank you :)!
Review By [Robby] • Date [30 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Konoha Halloween" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
nice to see you again!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Konoha Halloween" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked your beginning. Now I look forward to seeing what happens to the New and Improved Xander.
Comments from author:
haha I'll try my best to make the story readable
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 May 08] • Not Rated
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