GREAT TO SEE MORE OF THIS

Thanks! :)

very very good

Thank you :)

Pretty good story hope you continue it.

Six months, no updates *wah*

Great story. Update soon.

smooth transitions into the company. I was mildly surprised when the Mayor finished the ritual uninterrupted and wasn't put a large hole through his head by the stealth ship, but that makes the story more interesting to keep him alive for now. all in all, I cannot think of a way to improve this fic. the hint about SG1's further involvement is intriguing as is the AI's getting together for a chat. random thought: throwing in the Charmed ones would make for an interesting plot twist considering their abilities, especially if Rogue grabbed by the time-stopper one and suddenly was "unfrozen".

Great story! And I am glad you have added a new chapter! Plus, what are you going to do about baby Kal-El? You cant just leave him in stasis! Oh! You should have Xander figure out a way to safely enlarge him and let Giles and Jenny raise him! A Gypsy Kal-El with Giles-isms!

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

Interesting job on the new chapter, I hope you'll add more soon.

-How is Anakin able to survive without his helmit on? In the original trilogy he needed on to live.

I hope you didn't choke on the accumulated dust when you picked up this story again :D
Jokes aside, this was the story that got my attention to your writings, so I'm glad to see it updated. I just hope it doesn't take you as long to update it again :D

Is the pocket dimension now unraveling or not?

If not and most of the chaos energy is still in it, could it be used to make-real certain props and the like?
Lets say a model of the SR-2 Normandy (Mass Effect 2&3), Babylon-4 and/or 5, certain Star Trek ships like the Prometheus, Incursion and Defiant (cloak, stealth/trickery and armor/weapons), The factory station from Macross/Robotech since it would have the protoculture resizing chambers (helps with baby superman and the Colony ship) in it (though it will need a ship with a Protoculture-Matrix source like the SDF-1&3), Piece Million (Gundam Wing, Phase Shift with Gundanium armor/alloy sound really nice, plus it gives some good OS they could use).
Kukai Foundation docked to the Durandal (Xenosaga) could also be intresting.


I do wonder if there is a empty Mobile Emmiter from Star Trek Voyager in the pocket dimension, I bet Cortana would love it.
With a little work, they could use mini-World-Devastator as repair drones, also think about the really small computer systems they could create and how big it would still be in relation to normaly sized objects.

As for safe-houses, if they can get a Macross/Robotech resizing chamber, they could make them in a phone-boot and adding Naruto verse dimensional storage pockets, I'm getting Tardis (Doctor Who) feelings about the possible options in locations.
It also would be a great way to mess with SG-1 (always funny, Daniel should know the show/serie atleast, hint, hint).

Brain from Pinkey and the Brian his hobby is taking over the world, he once did it and became bored, so he gave it all up to be able to do it all again from the start.
Perhaps giving them the challage(?) to stop (super-natural) evil in it's tracks?
It would annoy the Major when he's searching for the latest persons to challage him true scrying (Rats???? Lab-Rats???).

On that thought, are there more people in the dimensional pocket?
Lets say Data, Seven, Demona, some zoids, ect.

As for the World Devestator(s), let them use Venator Star Detroyers to house some basic factory machines (like those the World Devestators are based on) on their main flight deck.
They could also double as cargo ships and the like, if done right.
Which would give them a tactical advancement

Not bad at all keep up the good work thanks and bye.

Thank you thank you!

It's good to see you in the author seat again. A well written chapter. A little abrupt in adding a lot of characters at once but it adds a bit of "chaos" to the mix.

Good part, It's great to see an update to this story. It's always been one of my favorites. Can't wait to read more.