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Review of chapter "Initial Investigation" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Might be short but packed full of nifty details and was very well written. Love it!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Very interesting start, Willow and Xander make such a great dual.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tours and Tales." from Chaoskitten
Review:
Eeek

Can't wait for an update.

ROFL

Try being late for your interview because of an accident (I still got the job though)

At least on the first day you know that you are employed LOL
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Initial Investigation" from neverwill
Review:
I hate to see Tony go, but it'll be interesting to see Gibbs work with the new team. It looks like your implying Willow may be the daughter he thought was dead (can't wait to see). Will you also address why Xander & Willow are working a Fed job now instead of with the new Council?
Comments from author:
I always felt that NCIS did a great job of making DARN sure that when someone's dead, they stay that way. In honor of that, I'm afraid that Kelley is in fact dead and buried.
I like the guess though.

I'll get to why they chose this job, but so far, Gibb's perspective is monopolizing my mind. I'll get out of that gear with the next chapter, I believe.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Initial Investigation" from slightlyeccentric
Review:
This looks really interesting, I hope that you add more soon.
Review By [slightlyeccentric] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kimera
Review:
That is one heck of a prologue, I like it a lot. Please keep the chapters coming. I look forward to your next update!
Review By [Kimera] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Neviditelny
Review:
Interesting premise. I look forward to seeing where you go with this, and hope that you update soon.

One quick thing - Calleigh's name is spelled with two L's. You only used one. It's the only error I caught.
Comments from author:
BAH. How the heck could I miss that!?

Fixed. and thank you. I'm on vacation for 2 weeks, and depending on how much relaxing I get in, I might get a bit more updating done.
Review By [Neviditelny] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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