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Review of chapter "I'm Adopted?" from Fighter
I think that this is a great start. I can't wait to read more. Sorry to say I don't know much about SGA, but I love what you've written so far. Please come back soon with more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Next chapter will be up soon! Promise!
Review By [Fighter] • Date [2 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I'm Adopted?" from martelcris
Well done !!!

I'm waiting for more soon!!

If I remember right J.Sheppard has a older brother, 'cause in one of the last episode of this season when he went to his father funeral with Ronon, there are a fight between the two brothers on his choice of career and his lack of interest on the family business.

if you want to change - no problem - AU is AU and "Author write as you wish" is norm !
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it so far! And thanks for the info as well. Next chapter should be up here in the next hour or so, just as soon as I finish responding to reviews!
Review By [martelcris] • Date [2 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I'm Adopted?" from AllenPitt
Very recently, there was an ep where Sh's father died, so he goes back for the funeral & meets his brother... very forgettable, feel free to erase all that. I do wonder what the reason is for giving up his kid... sure hope he's got a good reason.
I was about to suggest Cordelia use Willow's hacking skills on the internet, but this is just after C. caught Willow & Xander that's probably not a good idea. Heh. Maybe C. will do this search instead of "making a wish"...
So... if C. figures out who he is, will she end up going to air force academy instead of LA? Will the NID think to use her against Shepherd? Inquiring minds want to know!
Comments from author:
Thanks for letting me know that John had a brother. Yeah...I'll be ignoring him, lol! As for all of your questions...Well, you'll just have to keep reading to find out! *Grins*
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I'm Adopted?" from amusewithaview
I would definitely read more of this! There aren't enough stories that go AU in the high school years, especially with the side-Scoobs.

Comments from author:
*grins* I'm glad you like it! I actually already have the next 3 chapters written but I wanted to space out the posting a bit. And I totally agree about there not being enough stories that go AU in the High school years!

Anyway, thanks for the review and like I said, I'm glad you like it!

~ Kyra
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [2 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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