OOO!! This looks like it's shaping up to be a great story, looking forward to more. I'm starting to really like the Spander ship, and actually, I think it was your other story, Time After Time that got me into it.
Comments from author:
Oh yay, got someone into Spander world... makes me happy ::grins::
I used to write mostly Spander. Now I'm mixing it up with cross-overs with SPN, but still a Spander-girl at heart. Of course this story is co-written with Nash, as is TAT :)
This is a very interesting beginning! I look forward to the havok of AU!Xander and Xander together. If regular Xander's girlfriend is Anya, she'll surely try to get both Xanders in her bed.
Comments from author:
Great... glad the beginning pulled you in. Child!Xan is always so much fun.
Heee, I like the idea of AuXan and Xan creating havoc, but writing them together in a scene is hard/confusing. This story will focus more on Au!Xand and Spike.
Ha ha on Anya, she SO would. Then it would be a battle between Anya and Spike...
Review By [SusanAnthony] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
I'll track this one .... Just kinda curious though -- The Xander with the eye patch is the Xander from the first part of the story -- yes? If so, you need to be a little more clear on the transition between universes. And if not so, you still need to be a LOT more clear on what's going on ..... please .. :)
Comments from author:
Both Xan's have an eyepatch.
You're right, the meeting of the two Xan's was confusing. I plan to go back and try to clarify it later this week, thanks for pointing it out.
Luckily, there won't likely be too many scenes with both Xan's in them, which should make it easier to write/be clear.
Thanks again, appreciate your taking the time to provide concrit.
*Hugs*
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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