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Review of chapter "Ch. 3" from Darkhime
Review:
that was hot...can't wait for more updates
Comments from author:
Thank you :) More very soon, might even be the last part. Not sure if it will go one or two chaps more. Shortish story.
Review By [Darkhime] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ch.2" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I'm glad to see more of this story!
Comments from author:
And I'm glad you're still enjoying it. It's getting written pretty fast. I think the next part will be up in about 4 days or so.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lindiel
Review:
OOO!! This looks like it's shaping up to be a great story, looking forward to more. I'm starting to really like the Spander ship, and actually, I think it was your other story, Time After Time that got me into it.
Comments from author:
Oh yay, got someone into Spander world... makes me happy ::grins::

I used to write mostly Spander. Now I'm mixing it up with cross-overs with SPN, but still a Spander-girl at heart. Of course this story is co-written with Nash, as is TAT :)

Glad you're enjoying it!
Review By [lindiel] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
This is a very interesting beginning! I look forward to the havok of AU!Xander and Xander together. If regular Xander's girlfriend is Anya, she'll surely try to get both Xanders in her bed.
Comments from author:
Great... glad the beginning pulled you in. Child!Xan is always so much fun.

Heee, I like the idea of AuXan and Xan creating havoc, but writing them together in a scene is hard/confusing. This story will focus more on Au!Xand and Spike.

Ha ha on Anya, she SO would. Then it would be a battle between Anya and Spike...
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Darkhime
Review:
this story sounds interesting...can't wait for more updates
Comments from author:
Really glad you're enjoying it. I think we'll be posting a chapter every 5 - 7 days, as quickly as we can :)
Review By [Darkhime] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordCorwin
Review:
I'll track this one .... Just kinda curious though -- The Xander with the eye patch is the Xander from the first part of the story -- yes? If so, you need to be a little more clear on the transition between universes. And if not so, you still need to be a LOT more clear on what's going on ..... please .. :)
Comments from author:
Both Xan's have an eyepatch.

You're right, the meeting of the two Xan's was confusing. I plan to go back and try to clarify it later this week, thanks for pointing it out.

Luckily, there won't likely be too many scenes with both Xan's in them, which should make it easier to write/be clear.

Thanks again, appreciate your taking the time to provide concrit.

*Hugs*
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nightslayer
Review:
i liked it, can't wait to see where you take it though
Comments from author:
Great to hear that, thank you. Hope it goes good places, lol Next part on or before the weekend.
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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