Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from leb
this is a great story! I hope you update it soon
Review By [leb
] • Date [29 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from agnar
Sorry but this entire sequel is just one big 'how fucking stupid can we make Xander' and it's really fucking annoying.
He wasn't a moron in the first fic, but apparently when possessed on Halloween, the council Vamp stole half of Xander's IQ and all his common sense on the way out.
He dusts most of the vamps in the 'Dale, but doesn't go loot their nests or anything to pay his way more easily. He rolls a guy but doesn't make sure the truck he buys is worth a dime like a complete fuck up. He bumbles along from fuck up to fuck up just like the Zeppo he is later accused of being, rather than the clever one with some COMMON FUCKING SENSE he actually usually was.
Oh and despite him accepting he was an Alpha in the first fic, he then NEVER shows a single HINT of such afterward, he just rolls the fuck over for everyone around him.
Your Xander isn't worth a fucking plug nickel, he's too damned dumb to live.
Review By [agnar
] • Date [26 Feb 14] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Boostercc
When are you going to write and upload chapter 12?
Review By [Boostercc
] • Date [14 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from nerfherder
You unutterably miserable bastard! You left it there and then didn't update?!? Come back and give us all some relief!
Review By [nerfherder
] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Norbert
its to darn bad that you abandoned this story, it was interesting.
Review By [Norbert
] • Date [7 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from tchizek
Well this is very interesting, I would appreciate it if you could continue it - even if it has been several years...
Review By [tchizek
] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Zyanadryn
OMG! You HAVE to continue this story!!!
Review By [Zyanadryn
] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from jgoodman
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman
] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from SilentAddiction
Please pick this story up again!!!!!
Review By [SilentAddiction
] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from teddybear
I really enjoy reading this story. I hope you continue to write.
Review By [teddybear
] • Date [16 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from DarkFaerieYumi
*gleeful cackling* this is great! i love it!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi
] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from AonGealach
If you love us, your loyal fans, you will post a new chapter soon!
Review By [AonGealach
] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from hpssslashfan
CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MORE!!!!! whooo hooooo!!!! Xander rocks!
Review By [hpssslashfan
] • Date [16 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from kayron
In Anita Blake canon, Richard could call on all werewolves. JeanClaude could call all the vampires in his line. Narcissus (werehyena Oba) could call on all hyenas. Xander's hyena wasn't a warm flesh and blood animal. It was a primal hyena spirit. A demon. Does that mean that Xander can exert control over ALL demons? That would be handy if he stayed on the hellmouth, but what good does that do him out in the greater world (which doesn't have random rampaging demons)? I'm wondering if Xander will actually dust Angel? Or, will Willow ensoul him in time for Xander to just need to throw Angel's blood into the Acathla portal. Xander's vampire is the child of the 'Sweet Mother' who is supposed to be the originator of all vampies. That means that Xander's vampire should be both VERY old and smart. Surely he would know a way to make the soul permanent, so that Anel and Buffy can't slip and bring Angelus back.
Review By [kayron
] • Date [11 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Obsidian
awesome dark xander so far I look forward to more.
Review By [Obsidian
] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Not Rated