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Review of chapter "Innocence Lost" from (Past Donor)morgyair
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Loved it and I'm still looking forward to the next part
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from nighthunter
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Found your story by luck of the draw and it has been a great read so far keep up the good work.
Review By [nighthunter] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from Jess
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Awwww that sucked butt that Angel died. *pout*
Review By [Jess] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from (Past Donor)Morithil
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Good story, I'm looking forward to reading more. Looking forward to where you plan on going with this story.
Review By [(Past Donor)Morithil] • Date [3 Jul 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from Elleria
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Sad. Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [3 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from carmsfic
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Yes please continue. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
Review By [carmsfic] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from KarlStahl
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Very good story. When the first chapter started with a four-year-old in search of a toilet I wondered if I were wasting my time. But your story developed surprisingly well and I had a lot of fun reading it.

Now I guess you had good reasons to kill the Terrabot Angel.

Please continue.
Review By [KarlStahl] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from Karone
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Continue, eh?

Please!

I agree about the comment about being able to get emotionally involved over a freaking fridge. Poor Angel...

Is there some way, Xander can put the spark back in a heal Angel? Yeah?

But back to the point, please continue. Thanks.
Review By [Karone] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from Darklight
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Oh oh did they make a gigantic mistake, kidnapping Xander and hurting him, almost killing him. All that wouldn't had much consequence from Xander. His terrabots would have hunted them down and grounded them to pieces.

Killing Angel, that was a big no no, when Xander is going to wake up finding out they killed Angel. Somehow I get the feeling that Xander is going blow his top when he finds out Angel got killed.

So Xander is going to feel and express all those dark emotions, hate, anger, grief and create a bunch of new Terrabots, with a new directive.

Keep the chapters coming.
Review By [Darklight] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from Duken
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CONTINUE?
>YES NO

*hits 'enter'*
Review By [Duken] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from Friendlyperson
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I am weeping! Oh dear Lord, that was sad, and I went into total fangirl mode. Please continue, pleasepleasepleaseplease! I know how hard it must be to keep your muse going, so I pray with all my beta power that your muse continue to shine a light and guide the way for this story! I'll make electronic cookies for it if it does!!
Review By [Friendlyperson] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from grd
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A mark of a great author, to have your readers in tears over a fridge! Amazing! Well done.
Review By [grd] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
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Poor Xander is going to be devastated! I was sniveling myself.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from purrfus
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Its amazing how attached I've become after only a few chapters.

Can't wait to find out why.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death of an Angel" from (Past Donor)morgyair
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OK I'll reserve judgement....I'd gotten really attached to Angel but I will admit that I wondered what you were going to do with the other Angel in the series....
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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