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The Sleeper Awakens

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Review of chapter "The Morningstar" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
So, who is River? The Doctor? The Master? The Rani? Romana? Or someone else?
Comments from author:
One of your guesses is correct, but I'm not going to tell you which one...
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Morningstar" from MarbleGlove
Review:
Oh Wow! Just wow! This is amazing and I really hope you update soon.
Review By [MarbleGlove] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Truth & Recrimination" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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The Master has been used a lot lately. I was hoping she'd turn out to be The Doctor's clone daughter.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [8 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Truth & Recrimination" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Well worth the wait!

River is The Master... *twirls giddily
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [23 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Truth & Recrimination" from RevDorothyL
Review:
So glad you're continuing with this. We knew Jack and Mal could be scary when they needed to be, but very good work bringing out the scary in Simon and River, too, in this chapter.
Comments from author:
Scary River is easy; after all, no power in the 'verse can stop her, a phrase that is starting to take on whole a knew meaning as this story progresses.

As for scary Mal? Well, do you want to meet the real him?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Truth & Recrimination" from tals
Review:
Very, very nice chapter. I love the creepy ending, It'll be interesting to see who (or what) River really is. She might just be "reading", or she might be the Master, the Doctor or the Big Bad Wolf. Very intriguing. I love the characterwork, although I feel that they were a little too harsh on Simon and River's father initially. For all they knew he might have just adopted a girl, and taken care of the one heirloom she had (the watch). Obviously, when he admits to knowing that they were sending River to be experimented on by the Alliance all bets are off. Also, in the last chapter; the Operative was perfect; you had his voice down perfectly, that creepy politeness and scary honesty. Great work. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
If I told you the truth about River, I'd have to kill you; even my Beta doesn't know for sure where I'm going with her yet. I know exactly where, even got some of it written down for future reference, but I'm not telling. I guess you're just going to trust me on this one.

Gabriel Tam, like a lot of people in history, has done bad things for (from his point of view) the best of reasons. But, as the old saying goes, the road to hell is paved with good intentions. Still, I didn't want to make him as outright evil as some people have in other fics.

He's AN Operative, not the same guy from the movie. I have a very clear picture in my head of what he looks and sounds like. For some reason, it's a lot like Kevin Costner in Robin Hood: Prince of Thieves. Go figure...
Review By [tals] • Date [22 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Truth & Recrimination" from Booster
Review:
Eeep! This is horridly plausible and deeply gripping. Who's in the fob-watch, indeed.
Review By [Booster] • Date [21 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Truth & Recrimination" from Almadynis
Review:
More? Please?
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [21 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Truth & Recrimination" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Oh sh... ! Please don't tell me that River is the Master. I believe that Jack believes that she is.
But it could also be that she is the Bad Wolf ... Ouch!
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [21 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Truth & Recrimination" from draconis
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Very good story. Spookey as all hell.

I've got to ask, if it's such a catastrophically bad idea to get the watch and River together....why is Jack apparently so determined to do so?

If I were Mal or Simon, right now I'd be asking Jack to slow things down just a gorram minute and explain things just a tetch more.
Comments from author:
The last thing Jack wants is for anyone, least of all River, to open the watch until he's got a better idea of just who he's dealing with.

But you know what they say about best-laid plans and all...
Review By [draconis] • Date [21 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Truth & Recrimination" from Innogen
Review:
Cliffhangers are so much fun-Not! You have my full attention. I hope 'The Sound of Drums' is only Jack's anxieties projecting towards River, rather than River being evil. Maybe any timelord that morphed into 'human' during the Time War, and left in that state too long, might hear the drums. Or maybe..., hmmm..., not sure. Maybe I need to think about it some more.

I'm looking forward to your next chapter!

~Innogen
Review By [Innogen] • Date [21 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Home Is Where The Truth Is" from ghostwhowalks
Review:
I've been enjoying this, thank you.
Review By [ghostwhowalks] • Date [26 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Home Is Where The Truth Is" from (Past Donor)AmarinRose
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Oh-oh. This is going to be bad, either way. If River is the Master, she'll go insane. And if River is the Doctor, he'll go Oncoming Storm. *shivers* Of course, the possibility that she's neither of them is intriguing...
Review By [(Past Donor)AmarinRose] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Home Is Where The Truth Is" from Almadynis
Review:
More please!!!!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [20 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Home Is Where The Truth Is" from octarinefirefly
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So... Romana? The Rani? Susan? Some other unnamed female Time Lady? Cool idea, whatever you do, though obviously I prefer that River is not evil.
Review By [octarinefirefly] • Date [19 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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