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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Six" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Very complex plot. I'd say I enjoy the character moments more so than the exposition and strategy parts, but you seem to have a fairly good balance. I'd like to know things like Ben Wright seems like just a name. Do we know anything about how he looks except that he's male? What's his height compared to the others around him, etc. Because his name is Ben, do we have to worry about him being this universe's version of Glory?
Comments from author:
Actually I hadn't realised that, I'll address that in the next chapter; can't have my OC looking like a blank canvas ;-)

He's not the same guy in BtVS, just imagine the memories that would trigger in Willow and Xander 0.o
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm trying to figure out if it was the extra magic done to heal Xander that is breaking through the spell holding his memories in check, or if it is time and thought that is allowing some to break through. Perhaps obvious is that they won't get their adult forms back, but most of their memories... that could be possible.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine- revised" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like how now this chapter could have been one day later or a few days later. You're not sure how much time has elapsed, just not much. Possibly even the same day if Maybourne and Samuels were in the area for other meetings.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five- revised" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I think this is the first time I'm reading these revised chapters -- and I must say that overall they are stronger than the original ones.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad I spend the extra time on them :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two- revised" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm enjoying re-reading and look forward to the newer material when I get to it.
Comments from author:
Thanks!

Glad you're enjoying the fic :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One- revised" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Ah, young doctors in love...Is Brightman an MD? If not, never mind. I love the moments between the children and SG-1. Thanks and well written as always.
Comments from author:
No, he's not a doctor of medicine; he's a doctor of Psychology

Yep, writing SG1 and the children is fun- writing the two doctors comes in second :)

Thanks, glad you liked it
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [2 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Four" from Genuka
Review:
Interesting tact. Sooooo, is Buffy and company gonna land on the floor in battle stance in the middle of the summit? *evil smirk*
Comments from author:
They might do ;-)

Thanks for the review!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Four" from Eureka
Review:
Soo...System Lords getting together and Asgard moved kids right in front of them. GOOD!
Comments from author:
Yup. I figured that moving the kids to protect Earth was kinda of a moot point if the Goa'uld thought they were only being cloaked somehow.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from Eureka
Review:
I have no idea what I had typed but I know it was a good chapter. Site maintenance happened when I tried to post.
Comments from author:
I only got one message from you and that was this one, so no worries :)

Glad you like the chapter

Thanks for the review!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [25 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from Genuka
Review:
Nice filler. My head hurts but I could still easily read and comprehend all of the major points and even most of the nuances. You have no idea how rare it is for that to happen when I'm having a migraine that's threatening the way this one is! More please!
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad you like it

I hate migraines, the evil things- get better soon :)

Will be updated pretty soon; i already know how it's going to end
Review By [Genuka] • Date [25 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from grd
Review:
Eager to see SG1's reaction to the two kids in their adult size.
Comments from author:
Me too.

I was actually mulling over, in my head, how the situation would go; it'll be fun :)

Thanks for the review!
Review By [grd] • Date [24 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from kaekae
Review:
Lt. Jennings is British (or maybe canadian)? I think that should be clearer.
The reason I think she is British is because fortnight is not a term used in the US, ever.
Comments from author:
Really?

I'll just go and correct that; hate when that happens 0.o

Thanks for the heads-up :)
Review By [kaekae] • Date [24 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Very nice. Good to see Janet get some attention. And Willow and Xander being happy at not being sent of alone made me happy too.

Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
Thanks!

Glad you like it

Janet's one of my favourite characters :)

Yep, hopefully the fact that Jack and Sam opted to go with them will nix a lot of their mistrust; Plus Dr. Wright's volunteering has put him in Janet's 'Good Book' ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [24 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from djhardim
Review:
Looks good. Hopefully, Thor can do something about Xander's eye.
Comments from author:
Actually, Willow healed Xander's eye a few chapters back; beat Thor to it, come to think of it Thor could have healed Jack's bad knees, wonder why he didn't...

Anyways, thanks for the review!

Glad you like it :)
Review By [djhardim] • Date [24 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Two" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Nice surprise, bringing in the possibility of a rescue/recovery operation from the buffyverse there at the end.
Comments from author:
Thanks!

They'll have trouble retrieving(sp?) them :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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