Review of chapter "Chapter One- revised" from
BumpkinReview:
well, this is a very interesting tease of a start - not really enough to get your teeth into but interesting nonetheless, keep it coming - I am tracking.
keep penning,
Marns
~pN
Comments from author:
It'll probably be updated tomorrow; yay! tracker
thanks for reviewing!
Review By [
Bumpkin] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One- revised" from
wolfmanReview:
Good start. Please update soon.
Comments from author:
thanks!
i've already started the next chapter but i'm still finishing off SC chapter 20 so it won't be updated today. it will be soon though.
Review By [
wolfman] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]