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The God of Chaos

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Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from (Past Donor)gunsmith
Review:
purrrfect! love this and hope it develops into something more than a one-shot. Bravo!
Review By [(Past Donor)gunsmith] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from AmethystSiri
Review:
Great story :) Will you be writing a sequel? please?
Review By [AmethystSiri] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from LordCorwin
Review:
A call for MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from theunixer
Review:
Oh yes. Please continue this!

Since Xander remembers some of his talents, like sneaking onto that Army base with Cordelia to get that rocket launcher, there is no reason 4yr. old Xander can't find a way to get from home and into the SGC on his own. Oh, what fun!

It would be good if Xander does start to remember his past life. Best of all, have one of the other Gods who will visit give Jack visuals of Xander's past life on DVDs. This would be for those Jack thinks should know (including SG1, Gen. Hammond, and Ferrietti) as well as to show to Xander when he is older. Letting them see Xander's past life would allow them to really understand him (plus the their emotional responses to the horrific nature of the life he led).

Plus, Janus didn't rule out Willow being able to bring Xander's friends (Buffy, Dawn, Faith, Kennedy, Vi, and other younger Slayer's) in for a visit either (as Xander's 'bodyguards', not just the Gods Janus said would be popping in from time to time). They (the SGC people) should be able to sense the extremely feral danger a Slayer's presence radiates. Oh, the colorfull threats... How about Buffy (when told of the NID): "Anyone hurts Xander and I'll shove my hand down their throat and pull their entrails out through their mouth" and Willow: "I'll just skin them", and doing so to some nearby fruit with a wave of her hand as a demonstration. It would be even better if Kinsey and some other NID people were present at the time to see it.



Anyway, a very good job. Please continue this, perhaps as a sequal or even a series.
Review By [theunixer] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting set-up. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from SassyFrass
Review:
Very funny. And you know, that explains so much about Jack.
I would love to see more, especially with all those hints about keeping him away from weapons, and hyenas.
It's just great.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from (Moderator)LisaF
Review:
This was a lot of fun, but it felt like it was the middle of the story, and I was missing the beginning and the ending. I do you hope you decide to write more in this verse.
Review By [(Moderator)LisaF] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from grd
Review:
Love the intro. Hope you write more of this very very interesting tale you've developed.
Review By [grd] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from Ladeia
Review:
Okay you MUST write more of this or a sequel!! This was great. I loved the whole thing and hope to see more of it soon.
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from GypsyDruid
Review:
I like it!
Review By [GypsyDruid] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from HarmMarie
Review:
Nice.
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from PsychoWill
Review:
Cool story, I love the fact that Jack is second only to Xander in the chaos department.
I pity the people around them, they're getting a double whammy of trouble.

Please continue this story
Please, please, please, please, please!!!

-psycho
Review By [PsychoWill] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from (Recent Donor)HiltonK
Review:
You definitely need to have strong words with the muses - this 'verse deserves more!
Review By [(Recent Donor)HiltonK] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great writing.

I loved the thought of Jack as Janus' avatar and raising Xander with the SGC's help.

Please continue this.

Thanks

Lee
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from WoolWytch
Review:
Very entertaining, but you might want to go back through and double check for mis-spellings. I saw a Thing in place of Think... minor stuff like that.

This would make a very good series, I'd love to see the sequel
Review By [WoolWytch] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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