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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from cryefourme
Review:
I like this fic. Way to dumbfound Captain Cornfed. ;-D
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading, glad you liked it.
Review By [cryefourme] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from spk
Review:
Ecstatic about this update. LOVED the way that Angel & Harry handled Riley. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you, I am glad you like it so far. That is turning out to be most peoples favorite part.
Review By [spk] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Cmiller
Review:
I like this story and I was wondering if you were going to add Tara. and If so who would she be with if Oz is still around? well if Tara does come in can I suggest that you pair her with Faith because we all know that even with the territory split and what not Faith still would need a calming influence and who better then Tara who while shy is the definition of calm.
Comments from author:
I am glad you like it so far. Yes Tara may show up I am uncertain who to pair her with. Faith though I have definite plans for it will just take awhile.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from kayron
Review:
Harry might start calling them Mum and Dad to put Riley in his place, but it would be great if Harry starts thinking of them that way. It's great that Harry has a family. The Dursleys were certainly never family. They were jailers. I think that it is cute that Molly has caught up with modern times! I also love the fact that shopping and exchanging parental advice has stopped Molly from being a Dumbledore sycophant.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading.
Review By [kayron] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from speediebuffy
Review:
Loved the update can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [speediebuffy] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
RotFLMAO! Way to mark your territory, Angel and Harry. Guess they're just lucky that Buffy doesn't mind or at least one of them *cough*Angel*cough* would be in some serious pain when they are back at the hotel.
Comments from author:
Thank you, glad you like it so far.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from SwimmieTeam
Review:
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL. Please update again soonish cause I really wanna see what our favorite farmboy does next.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and for reviewing (So Fast). I am glad you like it so far.
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [20 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Genuka
Review:
Wonderful story! Please update soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you I'm working on it slowly.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Dragonelf
Review:
I like what you have done with this story so far and I hope you get inspired to update it.

::Gives the plot bunny a a bowl of Egg Drop Soup::

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The object in life is not to be on the side
of the majority, but to be insane in such a
useful way that they can't commit you.
- Mark Edwards
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Comments from author:
Thank you, and I am glad you like it so far. I am working on it, it is just slow going.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice first time in the alley and lol about all buying a broom, that was awesome :)
Also nice way in befriending the Weasley Clan.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [24 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Writing style could be better, but the central concept’s pretty good, and the resulting family dynamics should be interesting (Even if the idea of Angel being related to so many prominent wizarding families is a BIT of a stretch...)
Comments from author:
All of my stories run with the idea that the Wizarding community is so small and interbred that everybody is related to everyone there in some way shape or form. Given that four of Angels kids were magical I don't think is as far of a stretch as you might think. (They entered the Wizarding community over 200 years ago also)

Sorry You don't like my style but hey, it's mine. I have liked stories written is styles that normally grate on my nerves but the story itself drew me in. I can only hope to ever come close to that.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [10 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
*snickers* You know, you may not have loved this chapter, but I did. Everyone thinking independently to buy Harry a broom, and then just giving them to his new friends when they realised what they had done, just because it made Harry happy. This was so sweet!

And Buffy finessing Molly out of her tantrum, priceless!

This was very 'Scoobies United' feeling, and I definitely enjoyed it.

On my side, no worries about the long gap between updates, I'm more than guilty of that myself. Far too often, RL gets in the way of fic-writing.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading I am glad you like it so far. I kept trying to cut out Ron and the Weasleys thinking it was to soon and to fluffy, but they kept coming back and refusing to leave so they stayed in the end. I am having trouble deciding if they should maintain a long distance friendship or just meet again when they go to Hogwarts. Maybe I'll end up flipping a coin.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [10 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from winnie
Review:
another good chapter...one with a smile all the time
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [winnie] • Date [8 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from organicmagic
Review:
I like this story, but I would recommend looking into getting a beta reader. There are several grammatical and spelling mistakes in there that could be easily filtered out that way.
Comments from author:
I did have someone look it over she said they weren't glaringly obvious. I do use spell checker. She didn't say what or where they were. If I waited to get it back from her it was looking like it would be some time next year and I wanted to get it posted. So I jumped the gun. Sorry, most seem to enjoy it anyway so I am not going to worry about it.
Review By [organicmagic] • Date [7 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from SwimmieTeam
Review:
LOL!!! Please update faster!
Comments from author:
Thank you :) I'll try.
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [6 Nov 09] • Not Rated
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