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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from desartrattaz
Review:
Good start.
Comments from author:
Thanks :-)
Review By [desartrattaz] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Orion
Review:
It feels a bit rushed at times . . . you seem to only show the most important events. Consider a little filler . . . for example Buffy trying to get through a normal day while waiting for Willow to return, or a scene from Angel's group actually doing the painting and the shopping, etc.

Aside from that, I'm enjoying this so far, and look forward to seeing where this goes.
Comments from author:
I thought I was adding too much :-) go figure. I'll try to figure out a happy compromise.
Review By [Orion] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from arkeus
Review:
Nice, though there is a *lot* happening there, so i wonder if you have plans for the rest.

Oh, and i would have thought taking harry would only take a few minutes, excet if they want to go legally with england's adoption service or some such.

oh well...

Hoping for Uber!Willow
Comments from author:
They want to keep it is legal as possible. So that later down the line they have more ammunition if the Ministry or Dumbledore try anything, which they will. I do have plans but they seem to be individual scenes that need to be brought together somehow. I'm going to give it a shot, that may take a while.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Interesting start. (“Well, maybe I was a little wild in my youth.”)
( “and the ocean has a little water.” ) nice return shot by Whistler ;)

Probably should've focussed on just the Angel crew.
I think it would've been better without the Buffy drama.
She's still too immature for her to be a wife & new mom.

Keep writing though.
Comments from author:
I did debate about breaking it up into two different chapters one on Angel and the other on the Buffy crew. Buffy is very immature but I have yet to see that stop a young woman from trying anyway. They more often than not don't know they are too immature. It may make for an interesting learning experience for her and take the place of some things that cannot happen now because of the change in the time-line. I haven't decided yet. Thank you for the review.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AmethystSiri
Review:
I am looking forward to the upcoming meeting of Angel and Harry :) please update again as soon as possible :)
Comments from author:
Updates on the story by be a little bit slow because I'm working on a story on another site but I had the idea and wanted to get it out there. Thank you for the review. I'm glad that you liked it:)
Review By [AmethystSiri] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from demanda
Review:
Excellent! I can't wait to read more about how Angel and Buffy work things out, not to mention how Harry reacts to all this! But who exactly is going to be Faith's backup/Watcher?
Comments from author:
There are several things that are going to delay an update on this, one is I cannot seem to bring up my inner Cordelia. I think for right now Wesley will be left with Faith as the others go get Harry. As she hasn't and isn't going to torture him in this time-line; I think. I am currently further in on another story over it at Fanfiction.net so this may be slow to update.
So thank you, thank you, thank you for being my first review!
Review By [demanda] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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