Loved the last chapter but I wonder is there any chance of a series...it's so well set up!

Loved it!! I can not wait for the sequel!

*claps* Love it. Would love to see a sequel. Maybe with an unlikely vamp for the Triumvirate.

glad you liked it! thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi

The End! ....I wonder if Willow realizes the next step would be to get a third for a triumvirate....probably not, she isn't as up on non-hellmouthy affairs as she is on Sunnydale stuff....
One could almost wonder if there are still some monks around, making sure the Key is fully protected.... ie weaving events a bit. No way to tell, I suppose.

I wondered about ending it there...do you think I should? It feels finished to me, with maybe a sequel sometime in the future...i just don't know (but I'm relaly bad at finishing my stories, I just never know when the end is!) so...what do you think?

As far as the triumphirate goes, I don't actually think it would work - for a start, you're meant to have a vamp, a magic user (and I think its almost always necromancers) and an animal to call, and so far they only have two animals.

One could, couldn't one..I actually hadn't thought of that. neway, do you think its finished? I'm not sure...thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi

Awesome... I love the weres of the Anita Blake universe. Making Dawn a submissive is a very interesting and possibly heart warming twist. I am very much looking forward to more.

ooohhh...*grins*...things are getting really interesting now...I like it...

I just found this story and have to say wonderful job Shezzi, as usual!
Your characters are well written with a great story to go with them. Good Job!

Another chapter.

I have enjoyed the story so far and look forward to more.

The way that Dawn and Shang-da seem drawn to each other is a *little* more romance-y than is typical in an AB story -- more along the lines of the Dark Hunter stuff -- not that there's anything wrong with that! ;-)

I haven't read any dark hunter, so I can't comment on that...but you're right, it is very much a AB-verse romance, only slightly toned down (as in, they will not be having sex in the next five minutes) hehe thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi

Well, at least Willlow knows "the meaning of this." Thanks for sharing.

I love your story. You really like your cliffhangers don't you? Oh, and what the hell just happend? I'm gonna hazard a guess that they bonded or something similar. Onkay I love you, Buh-bye!

A CLIFFHANGER....big sigh please write more soon I really want to see where you are going with the whole story....

So.... Dawn and Shang Da. But what's the connection? (sorry, having a Ben/Glory moment here). Well, if she joins a triumvirate, I know who one of 'em will be Heh.

That was freakishly short for you lady!!! ANd quite evil :)

Later and Love
Bunney

Ya love me. So it doesn't matter (grins evilly) hehehehehe you already knew I was evil, bunney-kins! so what are you complaining about? Love xx Shezzi

Gah! I'm dying of the suspence over here! Part B soon please!