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Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from Scrappychic
Review:
I enjoyed this story. However the ending seemed to come too soon - as in, it feels like came in the middle of the story. I'm glad you mentioned doing a sequel at some point in your Author's notes or I'd be seriously pissed. lol. Good job.
Comments from author:
It just felt finished to me, and for someone who has a really hard time finishing stories, I went with it...really, you should blame AllenPit, that's who told me to go for it! thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Loved the last chapter but I wonder is there any chance of a series...it's so well set up!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from buffyandspike
Review:
Loved it!! I can not wait for the sequel!
Review By [buffyandspike] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JarodsSlayer
Review:
*claps* Love it. Would love to see a sequel. Maybe with an unlikely vamp for the Triumvirate.
Comments from author:
glad you liked it! thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [JarodsSlayer] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from AllenPitt
Review:
The End! ....I wonder if Willow realizes the next step would be to get a third for a triumvirate....probably not, she isn't as up on non-hellmouthy affairs as she is on Sunnydale stuff....
One could almost wonder if there are still some monks around, making sure the Key is fully protected.... ie weaving events a bit. No way to tell, I suppose.
Comments from author:
I wondered about ending it there...do you think I should? It feels finished to me, with maybe a sequel sometime in the future...i just don't know (but I'm relaly bad at finishing my stories, I just never know when the end is!) so...what do you think?

As far as the triumphirate goes, I don't actually think it would work - for a start, you're meant to have a vamp, a magic user (and I think its almost always necromancers) and an animal to call, and so far they only have two animals.

One could, couldn't one..I actually hadn't thought of that. neway, do you think its finished? I'm not sure...thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10 A" from prehensileclaw
Review:
Awesome... I love the weres of the Anita Blake universe. Making Dawn a submissive is a very interesting and possibly heart warming twist. I am very much looking forward to more.
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10 A" from Beth
Review:
ooohhh...*grins*...things are getting really interesting now...I like it...
Review By [Beth] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10 A" from Scrappychic
Review:
I just found this story and have to say wonderful job Shezzi, as usual!
Your characters are well written with a great story to go with them. Good Job!
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10 A" from fanofkali
Review:
Another chapter.

I have enjoyed the story so far and look forward to more.
Review By [fanofkali] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10 A" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
The way that Dawn and Shang-da seem drawn to each other is a *little* more romance-y than is typical in an AB story -- more along the lines of the Dark Hunter stuff -- not that there's anything wrong with that! ;-)
Comments from author:
I haven't read any dark hunter, so I can't comment on that...but you're right, it is very much a AB-verse romance, only slightly toned down (as in, they will not be having sex in the next five minutes) hehe thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10 A" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well, at least Willlow knows "the meaning of this." Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10 A" from SlytherinWere
Review:
I love your story. You really like your cliffhangers don't you? Oh, and what the hell just happend? I'm gonna hazard a guess that they bonded or something similar. Onkay I love you, Buh-bye!
Review By [SlytherinWere] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10 A" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
A CLIFFHANGER....big sigh please write more soon I really want to see where you are going with the whole story....
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10 A" from AllenPitt
Review:
So.... Dawn and Shang Da. But what's the connection? (sorry, having a Ben/Glory moment here). Well, if she joins a triumvirate, I know who one of 'em will be Heh.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10 A" from Bunney
Review:
That was freakishly short for you lady!!! ANd quite evil :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Ya love me. So it doesn't matter (grins evilly) hehehehehe you already knew I was evil, bunney-kins! so what are you complaining about? Love xx Shezzi
Review By [Bunney] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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